Interesting take on their relationships. I like the way you write.

It nice that Harry and Hermione find out that they have feeling for each other, It better that they got together. I do feel sorry for Ron that he won't have a girlfriend for long, I would think that it be hard for Ron to be friends with Hermione and Harry. Let face the fact that his ex-girlfriend and best friend is dating his other best friends, add to the fact that Hermione left him for Harry

I actually found this quite funny! I think I quite prefer how factual!Hermione dealt with her problems here. Nice.

it was a very cute fic. clueles Harry is always something. :D

Nice :) Glad Hermione talked (etc) Harry out of being dim.

lol cute! u should make more chapters instead of keeping to a one-shot

I liked the story. Is there anyway that you could write an epilogue to this story because you did leave some stuff out.

yay!! cool story!! are you going to do a sequel?!? A sequel could be really good but if not then its good on its own! :)