It was cute. Nice job.

nicely done. I had to add it to my faves so I can read it again whenever I want.
and I really like that you were inspired by what Gina Torres said about Zoe. She's such an interesting character.

short sweet cute and in character ) ver'nice

Thaqt was cute and ery in character. I loved the fluffiness and the diologue was perfect. Great story!

*SQUEE*

That is all.

PERFECTION.

*fails after no sleep*

*makes whimpering noises about the awesomeness of Zoe/Wash*

Perfect! I can totally see this happening (OOG, "her legs", and that poem that somehow ended with the word "corpsified"), because it's totally the kind of relationship they have. Well done.

Perfect character voice, with Zoe both strong and vulnerable, Wash funny and very affectionate.

The phrasing was some of the best Wash and Zoe I've yet read in fanfic, both the word choices and the syntax totally in character.

Very nicely done and sweet to boot!

a fun one! thanks.

SHINY! I love reading good bits about Wash and Zoe beig romantic.