Reviews for hurting the one I love
rhea lupin 1/9/10 . chapter 11
I loved this story! But we never got one answer: Why did James kiss Kelly in the first place?
rhea lupin 1/9/10 . chapter 10
Really cute. I loved the last lines!
rhea lupin 1/9/10 . chapter 9
Still can't see the beta thing, but I love the story. :D
rhea lupin 1/9/10 . chapter 8
Love it!

(I really should learn how to write well-rounded reviews.)
rhea lupin 1/9/10 . chapter 7
I love this, but I can't believe someone BETAED it. No offence to your beta, I'm sure she's perfectly nice, but her editing needs work!
rhea lupin 1/9/10 . chapter 6
*sighs*

Ela.
rhea lupin 1/9/10 . chapter 5
Angst makes me ... angsty. :D Love!
rhea lupin 1/9/10 . chapter 4
Again, the ending was AMAZING.
rhea lupin 1/9/10 . chapter 3
Ending was brilliant!
rhea lupin 1/9/10 . chapter 2
GREAT!

Love it.
rhea lupin 1/9/10 . chapter 1
I love these plots. :D
shelly 4/16/09 . chapter 1
Lily Luna is harry's child Lily Evans is harry's mother and james's wife
buttonbit 7/8/08 . chapter 11
Was that the end?

You used some adjectives too often in a paragraph, for instance 'emotionally' is used a lot...

I like the plot though and I'd like you to write more stories!
BlueSkyMornings 6/16/08 . chapter 1
aw how sad. I wonder if he heard her say that. probably not.
Kasabe 7/25/07 . chapter 11
that's the sweetest story i've read in a long time and it makes you want to

Squeal with delight
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