| Reviews for hurting the one I love |
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rhea lupin 1/9/10 . chapter 11I loved this story! But we never got one answer: Why did James kiss Kelly in the first place? |
rhea lupin 1/9/10 . chapter 10Really cute. I loved the last lines! |
rhea lupin 1/9/10 . chapter 9Still can't see the beta thing, but I love the story. :D |
rhea lupin 1/9/10 . chapter 8Love it! (I really should learn how to write well-rounded reviews.) |
rhea lupin 1/9/10 . chapter 7I love this, but I can't believe someone BETAED it. No offence to your beta, I'm sure she's perfectly nice, but her editing needs work! |
rhea lupin 1/9/10 . chapter 6*sighs* Ela. |
rhea lupin 1/9/10 . chapter 5Angst makes me ... angsty. :D Love! |
rhea lupin 1/9/10 . chapter 4Again, the ending was AMAZING. |
rhea lupin 1/9/10 . chapter 3Ending was brilliant! |
rhea lupin 1/9/10 . chapter 2GREAT! Love it. |
rhea lupin 1/9/10 . chapter 1I love these plots. :D |
shelly 4/16/09 . chapter 1 Lily Luna is harry's child Lily Evans is harry's mother and james's wife |
buttonbit 7/8/08 . chapter 11Was that the end? You used some adjectives too often in a paragraph, for instance 'emotionally' is used a lot... I like the plot though and I'd like you to write more stories! |
BlueSkyMornings 6/16/08 . chapter 1aw how sad. I wonder if he heard her say that. probably not. |
Kasabe 7/25/07 . chapter 11that's the sweetest story i've read in a long time and it makes you want to Squeal with delight |