ooh ooh i bet its atticus ifnot i don't know but if its chazz i'll laugh my gut out... good story

If it's Chazz, I swear, I'll scream.

Um, unless 'dou' is supposed to be 'thou', you're spot on, though the midevil grammer seems to be giving you a hard time. But, hey! I'm one of those freaks out there who not only understands Shakespearen dialet, but, if I read a play of his for too long, or watch a movie of one, will start THINKING that way! So I can't complain. Anyway, I like the idea, and I'm looking forward to the next chapter! (the muses reading over her shoulder all nod in agreement) Keep it up!

Tie-dyed Trickster (and her various muses)

lol this great story so far pleaz write more soon

speaketh- i think
it's thou ok

i bet its chumley

nice story i hope you update it soon.

whoo-hoo! im pretty good at medieval words, and thy shall gladly help thee in thou quest for the grandest story in all the land! plus, ive seen the spongebob episode quite a few times and i can help you with character roles, unless you have a good idea of that already. keep it up! (and at least youre doing something worthwhile to make me forget about the duel.) see ya!