make the sequel about the kids

Cute!! ^_^ Again, it has the same issues as the prequel, but I still liked it. You just need to work on adding detail and imagery to your stories.

Jyanne

OMG thats so funny! ^^ I was surrprised and sad when she started cutting herself but I love it its a wondderfull story! ^^

Aw, but i got one question: Which is the girls real name: Heaven or Tenshi? Anyway it was a great story! I suggested it to my other fan fiction friends!

Post the sequel soon! I luv the story!

You know something I think Garra and Heaven is my new faveorite couple in Naruto! GARRAXHEAVEN FOREVER!

wah its ended so quickly *cries* but a gd read ^^ looking forward to Master plus Slave equal TLC n da thrid story!!

Lol I love how the character Heaven is so freakin spasmodic! She is so funny! Okay and I'm just wondering...how old are these people? Cuz they seem young and way too young to be getting engaged to be married! Aw...but it's okay cuz Gaara is such a sweety. Okay well keep the chapters coming and I'll keep the reviews coming!

Wow! That was good! I loved the story! Gaara is so the hottest!

i loved it! aww! haha he got his butt kicked!

aw u mad heaven cut herself n den u spiked her, poor gal well hope they make up soon ^^. luv da idea of "Master Plus Slave Equals Love" n as always keep up da gd work n update soon

too lazy to put much in... Update soon panda butt!!

~LaCy~

Ok ok like woah. This has alot of drama but i can't help but luv it! I read the first story but I didn't get to finish it due to my brother being a computer hog but anyways i luv how you portray gaara as a luving person, BUT i think that you are putting Heaven through alot and it's kinda emo sad. but none the less i still luv the story.

NO don't slit ur wrists!! that's Bad! *thwaps with a newspaper* um... yeah... Update for the poor unfortunate hobo

~lacy

ahh! shes cutting herself! poor her i love the story keep going!