Also, in chapter 19 you have the correct science facts.
100 bonus points to you!

Ah, NaNoWriMo. I totally understand.
Luckily this year my mother got my
sister a laptop so she could write without using dad's computer
Anyway, the new chapter was good,
though a bit much argument.
I'm glad that someone knows what the heck creatures is.
I play docking station with Creatures 1 to DS.
Username is Tiktalik.

Alright, first off why are there no norns?
Second of all WILL YOU PLEASE FINISH THE STORY?

Why indeed do the Banshee hate the Shee so? This is getting better and better.
And sorry for forgetting to check this for updates in such a long time :/

This bit is particularly well-written, nice action! aah the evil banshee are evil!

The lemons float! but of course! XD you made me lol, I love in-jokes:)

I think this chapter, and the one before, have really driven home the nail about how vicious the Banshee can be.

Excellent work there. ^^

It seems like most people take it for granted that Sphericus is Earth, but I have yet to see an actual story about it until now. It's very well done; I love how you've developed Nacia and stayed true to the 'make-it-more-complicated-than-it-needs-to-be' characteristic of the Shee. I can't wait for the next chapter!

I'm likeing this story a lot, we do need more shee fanfic! and I like your way of portraying them, and the shee-human cooperation. Write more Lone Shee in it if you can :D

I'm still loving this.

*pokes*

Please keep writing! :D

I'm addicted to this story. PLEASE! You've gotta keep writing more, 'cos I'm inspired. Seriously.

*meeps*

Good story! Keep up the good work! Oh, and your footnote at the end of (It IS chapter eight, right?) chapter eight, bad idea.

I liked it. =)

Creatures is a great game. =D

I can forgive you, especially since the test on common sense was quite funny.

GO MYRA! YOU HAS FOUND A WAY TO FREE THE SHEE! *hugs Myra, then hugs Nacia for no reason*

*Tries in vain to add story to faves AGAIN*
Update soon, soon as you did with this chapter, or sooner. About the outburst above... I'm having one of the moments where a strong feeling of randomnes and sugar rush clash... Not a good combination.