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KimCSI
2008-08-18 . chapter 1
Aww :)
Kat
2007-04-16 . chapter 1
Funny, cute story with possibly the best line ever. Loved it:

“I’ll take the vegetarian,” he replied, kissing the top of her head before donning his glasses and shaking open his journal with his free hand. “If she’ll take the chicken.”

“She’ll take him,” she murmured. “For as long as she can have him. That’s a promise.”

Thanks for writing.
Forensic Nurse
2007-04-02 . chapter 1
I have to say that you are an excellent writer! This story was so funny & cute. I think that you really capture the spirit of Grissom & Sara's love.
Quill-32
2006-10-03 . chapter 1
Whe! Love the puns! So sweet, so real. Sara's evasions are a riot too. *applause*
msgrits
2006-09-25 . chapter 1
that was just very lovely
fugimermaid
2006-09-25 . chapter 1
AH! lovely and cute!
PhDelicious
2006-09-24 . chapter 1
Oh the puns, they slay me. Very amused by the teasing of SuperDave.
Western Arawen
2006-09-24 . chapter 1
Very sweet, I loved it.
ILU Greg
2006-09-24 . chapter 1
o how cute! very good! congrats
Manigault
2006-09-24 . chapter 1
Loved it. The last few lines were so perfect.
Peggiegg
2006-09-24 . chapter 1
This was really sweet! I think you ought to sequel it to a scene of them dancing at Super Dave's wedding...and then another sequel of their wedding...
XXKS81XX
2006-09-24 . chapter 1
very sweet.
stareagle
2006-09-24 . chapter 1
What a delightful little piece. I loved the line - “I’ll take the vegetarian,” he replied, kissing the top of her head before donning his glasses and shaking open his journal with his free hand. “If she’ll take the chicken.”
What a great line! You have a delightful sense of humor- It was fun teasing David and Grissom - thanks for the treat!
Claire-BearNZ
2006-09-23 . chapter 1
Kristen,
I love your writing, it never fails to amaze me how wonderfully you capture the characters. I have read all of your CSI stories several times, I love them, Thank you.
Also thank you for reminding me where I knew the name Rosseau from. However, my knowledge stems mainly from an overlarge Lost obsession, rather than any great knowledge in philosophy.
jtbwriter
2006-09-23 . chapter 1
That was good-so very believable! I love the humor-and
how Gris assured Sara so lovingly of his feelings!

Thanks for a goodie!
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