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| Kat 2007-04-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseFunny, cute story with possibly the best line ever. Loved it: “I’ll take the vegetarian,” he replied, kissing the top of her head before donning his glasses and shaking open his journal with his free hand. “If she’ll take the chicken.” “She’ll take him,” she murmured. “For as long as she can have him. That’s a promise.” Thanks for writing. |
| Forensic Nurse 2007-04-02 ch 1,  | abuseI have to say that you are an excellent writer! This story was so funny & cute. I think that you really capture the spirit of Grissom & Sara's love. |
| Quill-32 2006-10-03 ch 1, | abuseWhe! Love the puns! So sweet, so real. Sara's evasions are a riot too. *applause* |
| msgrits 2006-09-25 ch 1, anon. | abusethat was just very lovely |
| fugimermaid 2006-09-25 ch 1, | abuseAH! lovely and cute! |
| PhDelicious 2006-09-24 ch 1, | abuseOh the puns, they slay me. Very amused by the teasing of SuperDave. |
| Western Arawen 2006-09-24 ch 1, | abuseVery sweet, I loved it. |
| ILU Greg 2006-09-24 ch 1, | abuseo how cute! very good! congrats |
| Manigault 2006-09-24 ch 1, | abuseLoved it. The last few lines were so perfect. |
| Peggiegg 2006-09-24 ch 1, | abuseThis was really sweet! I think you ought to sequel it to a scene of them dancing at Super Dave's wedding...and then another sequel of their wedding... |
| XXKS81XX 2006-09-24 ch 1, anon. | abusevery sweet. |
| stareagle 2006-09-24 ch 1, | abuseWhat a delightful little piece. I loved the line - “I’ll take the vegetarian,” he replied, kissing the top of her head before donning his glasses and shaking open his journal with his free hand. “If she’ll take the chicken.” What a great line! You have a delightful sense of humor- It was fun teasing David and Grissom - thanks for the treat! |
| Claire-BearNZ 2006-09-23 ch 1, | abuseKristen, I love your writing, it never fails to amaze me how wonderfully you capture the characters. I have read all of your CSI stories several times, I love them, Thank you. Also thank you for reminding me where I knew the name Rosseau from. However, my knowledge stems mainly from an overlarge Lost obsession, rather than any great knowledge in philosophy. |
| jtbwriter 2006-09-23 ch 1, | abuseThat was good-so very believable! I love the humor-and how Gris assured Sara so lovingly of his feelings! Thanks for a goodie! |
| StubbyPenguins 2006-09-23 ch 1, | abuseadorable : ) |