*blinks* I like the plot idea behind this … at the same time I hate it for being so short (for some reason I keep seeing a longer version of it expanding to cover each lesson –IE, like the love bites- as the boys explore one another, each lesson broken up by the line “it was just practicing … until it wasn’t” – The whole thing ending with the scene where our favorite cowboy let’s those three magic words slip … and then *happy grin* the world falls to ruin because of failing team dynamics. I suppose you could even include the final battle scene if you were so inclined … though I doubt it’s really necessary).

*blinks again* then again, I think too much and like your descriptions and just might want to see more of them.

… my rambling aside, for a piece of this size, it was amazing the amount of plot and description you managed (and was truly a pleasure to read).

Shiva’s Avatar

Wonderfull written. Although shosrt, you captured the emotions so prefectly it was just perfect. Going in my favourites

The practice didn't go so well, eh? Because at the end it was real...