"'...that's a little... science fiction.'

Jake pointed to his chest. 'Guy full of nanites.'"

HILARIOUS! I just love everything about this story. It was funny and tensing and concerning the fact that I was actually close to crying when Jake 2.0 was taken off the programm, this is THE perfect replacement for it.
I admit that I had to look up some words, but I'm german, vocabulary is not my strength. I just loved it. ALL of it.

I read this fic elsewhere online, and I'm really glad I found it again here! :) This is a great story, it's just like an episode. There's intrigue, action and some humour too. The characters are spot on. All in all, quite a perfect fic. :)

This story is really great, I'm happy I went back and re read it. It has a really satisfying finale. Would have made an amazing episode.

Thank you for writing it.

Great story. It was exciting and funny and scary(loved the conspiracy). The wrapup was perfect,(Diane as heroine!)even if it did mean the story would stop.
Thank you.

Aw! Great ending, though I love your writing and this tv series, so I'm sad it's over. Maybe you'll do something similar?

Very good!

great! so glad u finished it. yoda, lol!

Wow, interesting and mega cold of Lou. I hope to see more about the ramifications of all this. Jake coming to terms and such. Good so far, keep going.

I love the grasp you have of the characters - their voices as well as the interaction between them. Please, please, please write more Jake fic, 'cause it's too sad that it's gone off air. I'd give you some constructive criticism if it wasn't already purty near perfect.

Your banter is so sparkly I need sunglasses.

Really good chapter!

Yeah, more story! :D I like the bit where he says "It's like I left my... my damn brother to house-sit - except for the part where I'd never do that because I'm not insane - and I come back three weeks later and the apartment's trashed, there's cans everywhere and somebody didn't even clean up the vomit on the floor."

Please say you're going to write more to this story. I really, really, really would like that. :)

People can be so disturbing. I'm glad Jake's going to be ok now.

Hoo-Ah!
Thank you for another hit out of the park. Logical, engaging and exciting plotline. Characters follow canon and their interaction was great. Loved the dialoge. I could "see" the story happening as if it were a TV episode. The spelling and grammer were perfect (OK, there was one mispelled word but it could have just been a typo that popped up when the file transferred). My Jake 2.0 mind is too busy doing the "happy dance" to think of any way this story could have been improved.

Great Versión, I can´t wait for the next chapter.
please continue soon!