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| Kiseki no Tenshi 2008-04-19 ch 10,  | abuseInteresting story!! Can't wait to read more! |
| SiLvErMaSk20 2008-04-03 ch 10, | abuseare you gonna update this story? i hope you will cause it seems like over a year when you last update this story... i really need to know what happen next... please update soon... thank you... |
| HaruJam 2008-02-26 ch 10, | abuse~does puppy dog eyes~ is there any hope of an update soon...? |
| dead feather 2007-11-17 ch 1, | abuseThis felt confusing. Where was Harry and why, what time was the flashback or was it one? |
| carrebear14 2007-11-15 ch 10, | abusePOst More |
| o0JubJub0o 2007-09-16 ch 10, | abusegreat fic, im looking forward to more. TTFN! ;p |
| infamous mc 2007-09-04 ch 10, | abusegrat i cant wait for the next one please update soon |
| Lord Vastria 2007-07-26 ch 4, | abuseThough your story is quite good, there are a few things I see that kind of annoy me, 1, The flaming whip is very similar to Abraxans story, Time of Destiny. The second thing is, a good way to spot a mary sue and gary stu is to think, are you giving a character alot of things that you would want? This is because it seems that you are making Emilia a mary sue because of the detail you put in such as: Chanel sunglasses, Nissan Skyline R34 car, Louis Vuitton handbag. Why did she have to take a car when she could have just apparated? It just seems weird. |
| suzy 2007-07-11 ch 10, anon. | abusewhats with the 'underworld' thing, if this is an underworld crossover you should put that in the summary, i really like this srory but the underworld parrt suddenly being in there was just random!?!?!? even if i really like the movies and stories with them this story suddenly having reference to it was just really random!?!? enjoyed the story though and update soon!?!? |
| sylphil 2007-06-27 ch 10, | abusethis story is just bloody awesome! i really, really, hope that you'll get over your writers block soon. i think you're a very good writer, the story has 'it'. this really rare touch to it which makes a story remarkable and the plot just...i don't now how to describe it (not only due to my limited english vocabulary, though it also has something to do with it;-) - it just seems to get faster and faster and i wasn't able to stop reading although my eyes hurt quite bad right now (it's 2.26 in the morning, by the way...). so, don't lose your faith in your writing skills, your muse will come back to you soon! |
| Ella M. Nite 2007-06-18 ch 8, | abuseHey, great story. Be careful though, you have so many great ideas that sometimes there seems to be one too many. Other than that, I really enjoy it. Hope to read more soon! |
| darkangelwp05 2007-06-15 ch 10, | abuseit was bloody awesome. Please update soon. Also, How does granger fit in this? |
| lizziekiss 2007-06-07 ch 1, | abusei love this! what else can i say? this is the best au story i have read so far! |
| coolcatt002 2007-06-01 ch 10, | abusei Really like this story and i hope the next chapter is soon |
| LadyChance 2007-05-01 ch 10, | abuseI love this story and please put hermione into the story too if she is a mage or just your regular witch so that she can make jezebel look weak and stuff |