 Irrelevancy 2009-04-30 . chapter 1-stunned at the absolute beauty of the whole thing-
...wow...
-eyes wide-
...that was... amazing...
-smiles-
Always liked the metronome. Find the sound comforting, for one reason or another
makes me want to cry
terrific
-tries to find a synonym to beautiful-
gonna go find my muse and sob now...
...or pick up The Eternity Code lying beside me and re-read that line I can recite from memory
"And one more thing. About my name, Artemis. You were right in London, it is generally a female's name. After the Greek goddess of archery. But every now and then comes along a male with such talent for hunting he earns the right to use that name. I am that male. Artemis, the hunter. I hunted you."
^^ |
 psychegirl 2009-01-18 . chapter 1 beautiful...rich and obscure in exactly the right places...one to read again! |
 Cheri de Poisson Impressionnan 2008-12-02 . chapter 1This was eloquent, being that I love the character of Minerva as well as Classical Music. |
 Thunderstorm101 2006-11-28 . chapter 1O...I love it!
Really great...especially the way she seems to wind down with the metronome. Didn't expect Artemis to come back, did she...?
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Wah! I wan't the next book to come out...! |
 kerricarri 2006-10-03 . chapter 1Magnificent and superb. A very canonically driven piece that explores a possibility in the three years that passed with Artemis gone. It was beautiful in its execution and flawless in style. Though very vague, I admit, it still was done in a very Minerva-esque style. I simply loved it.
Though I wonder as to Minerva's reaction upon hearing--even seeing!--Artemis alive. And even Butler had lost hope in the end...reading this and then rereading the ending to the book gives me a warm and fuzzy feeling inside. After reading this, it makes TLC's end all that much more sweeter.
Also, in your author notes you mentioned you cried for fictional characters. Might the book you cried for be The Lost Colony? |
 EvaliaPoison 2006-09-29 . chapter 1Good one, very musing and...just nice.I like the sector names, they're cool. Hehe, my metronome is black and it has a silver wind-up key too! LOL
Evalia |
 hollybridgetpeppermint 2006-09-25 . chapter 1great job as usual! :D
BANZAI!
~hollybridgetpeppermint |
 Sarah 2006-09-25 . chapter 1 Very good! I got TLC the day it came out in America and I was just waiting for someone to write a great fanfic about it. It was a bit confusing when it swiched from first person to third, but I got over that quickly enough and I thought it made the story more interesting. It was excellent and if there was typos or any other convention errors I didn't notice them. |
 Lupin Drake 2006-09-24 . chapter 1Wow. I have no idea what was going on in here, but it was wonderful all the same. I have to hand it to you, you are amazing. Sorry that I haven't been reviewing lately... but things have been crazy. Thank you for writing this; it has given me a pit of a peace of mind.
~ Koki |
 niccoyne12 2006-09-24 . chapter 1Great fic! Whatever you do do not continue it! It is so much better as a once off. I honestly think continueing it would ruin the entire mood of it! But where was Artemis during this? I didnt see hide nor hair of him in the entire fic! Great fic all the same! Bravo, Encore! |