 Kaileigh12 2006-12-17 . chapter 1Wow, is all I have to say! That was amazing! Especially the ending! I liked how it didn't end with some spectacular Crellie kiss I wish for, but it was Ellie's line and there wasn't a true happy ending. That was a nice touch! And I liked how you didn't write a paragraph and then have like ten verses to the song. And speaking of the song, you chose one that fit really well! Awesome job! |