Thats right, I'm lazy. That story was pretty good. I liked how you put in the assistants from Hat Trick, that was funny. Write on! I can't wait for more! (i think Scarlets hatred for Tseng should have something to do with a bar...)

Scarlet fic - now there's something I haven't seen before. I like her sense of humour. This could be polished up to fix some typos and stuff though - like 'giant red ord', 'falling of her behind' and 'assisstance'. The word 'Turk' should be capitalised as well.

Also, it doesn't look as though you know how to punctuate dialogue. Dialogue tags like 'he said', 'she said' shouldn't be capitalised. They're not a separate sentence; they don't make sense on their own. E.g. "Do you require assisstance, Mam?" He asked - this should read: "Do you require assistance, ma'am?" he asked.

The end seems rather abrupt to me. It's like a punchline that isn't quite complete. I'm not sure, it's only my personal opinion, but I think some kind of reaction from Scarlet would finish it better.

Well, I just spent most of the review criticising the story, but I did enjoy it. And if you want to continue, I think you should. I liked your characterisation of Scarlet. Some of the writing seemed off in places - could do with tightening up, etc - if you want me to expand on my points, just ask. :)

Yay, Scarlet!fic. I definitely think that you should continue. Love it! Mako Lady Monthly... Kya ha ha!

lol Scarlet you sucker. xD

You know, that IS the great question eh? Why on Earth does he have so many fangirls?

I love Hojo but seriously...

Update soon. ^_~

-Bree-