 ChocoBetty 2006-11-08 . chapter 1I already read this one before but haven't left a review. Probably because I thought that my review might come up longer than you story. Looks like drabbles just aren't what I like to read. It don't have to be a long story but I usually like it a little bit longer, with a deeper look on characters. But that is something about personal preference and has nothing to do with your story.
I like Mac and Stella and I think that you set this after the first episode of season 3 (what you have let straight to a spoiler warning for all those who haven't seen it yet). Well, maybe I'm just to talkativ for drabbles. Acutally I would hope that this short thing would be a great opening for a longer Mac/Stella story, where he is trying to figure out what he had missed and what else he missed and if he maybe misses Stella, or if it is just her who is giving him this look and leaves him thinking about it. Is it really that she is in love with him? I can't really tell by this short piece, you can guess it, but nothing is really mentioned. |