I can sum this up with one word: intense. I am a TA player and can vouch that all details are reasonably accurate. Good job, I can feel the air of teamwork just by reading this.

i see a few unit mistakes... but who cares, nice story...

i play total anhiallation all the time on my computer.. this was a very good story. very well written. i wish it was longer thought.

This was good, but the grammer needs some work.

Other than that, I would say that this story was well written and had a great action packed story line. One bad thing- where were the Zeus Kbots? I love those little guys...

The story was good up until this point"Mothers sobbing over lost ones..." The Core are supposed to be a race of machines with human brain patterns, not organics! Haven't you heard of the patterning process or Central Conciousness? Anyway I still think it was good up until that point.