Great POV about the inner corruption of Ba Sing Se. What hurts me though is in the finale, how that corruption was so deep that the kids couldn't liberate the city and had to flee for their lives. Ah well... a good one shot and here's to better things in Book Three: Fire

Great one-shot. Ba Sing Se is such a...disturbing place, and I liked how this described it.

(Claps) Great description.

ba sing se IS really creepy. I like your description and aang's mindset sounds really realistic.

Eek, I like it. Though I'm not sure about Aang breaking down the walls... it definately makes sense that that is what needs to be done, but it seems more of a Jet thing to do.

In any case, I like it and it captures the creepy feeling of the city.

Wow...that was amazing! I loved the ending of this it really makes you think. Ba Sing Sai is one complicated and weird place I'm interested to see how it is dealt with in the actual episodes.

Once again great one-shot, I really like the idea of Aang destroying the walls in his Avatar State.