Really good idea and nicely written.

intresting...wanna hear more! also for more comedy uyou can add my god Azrath (whos more of an asshole/sarcastic evil god who enjoys nature and painting smiley faces on moutain sides useing people...he once made a gaint smilely face with 1 person, regardless the person was a small speck by the time he was done and all the blood was on the moutain but it was a decent smiely face!) And his creature is a Neutral turtle who enjoys lazing about in the sun!

(also he loves to brag that he taught his creautre the maximum mega blast...8 bloody blasts fro the sky! BOOO-YA!

YOUR SIDE IS THERE AND MINE IS HERE!

I wish the gods really were like that in B&W. Or maybe a spin-off at least.

LOL! I always wondered what would happen if gods actually argued instead of just setting fire to other villages. "Your side is over there" Loved it.

OMG funny! great work!

Well...ummn...that was interesting...For some reason I got a sense of deja'vu while reading the monsters' actions...Either way, keep it up. These things give me a good laugh.

My good god! *wipes tears awawy*

My sides hurt... I'm still laughing my ass off!

My cheeks are stiff from all that laughing.

This hasn't happened to me for a long time. Thanks Noey.

Cheers.

I was just about to give this story a horrible review (as I do with all parodys of things I like)
Until I actually read the story
It seems more humor than parody
Well Good Job
By the way the gods in the game don't spit...
not that it matters

hahahaha this is good! keep writin man/lady i'd love to see this turn into a full story

HILARIOUS!

"cold weather" LOL!

Very humorous, very well-done.

Hehe hahaha!

Tee hee hee, very very funny.

Very Douglas Adamsish, with a message thrown in to boot!

AAAhhhh! THe poor sheep! Man, this story rocked! THat was hilarious! I loved. YES!

ROFL. This is some hillarious stuff, I must say. And it brings back some memories of when I had my leopard back in Black&White. A very great job, I must say. Keep it up!

Me likey!