|Reviews for The Line|
| iLoveRomance2o11 2/29/12 . chapter 1
Hermione's point of view for the last one I just read:) I liked it:)
| CyraAideen 5/3/10 . chapter 1
Did you make any more for this. Cause if you did then I want to read it.
| ellensin787 5/1/09 . chapter 1
"Don't hate me! I'm going to conclude this another day, it wouldn't have worked with this." when is that day!
| Rob-girl 3/28/08 . chapter 1
Um, good. I wish that you'd written in what happened between them when he opened the door. I can just imagine it: he opens the door, there's an awkward silence, and then Hermione just loses all control and kisses him with her arms around his neck. That would be nice. I think it would have been neat if that had been in there, but I liked it all the same.
| californiagirl1426 6/15/07 . chapter 1
I can't wait to read the sequel!
| JustAGirl101 9/24/06 . chapter 1
awwe that is so cute. cant wait to hear what happens next!
| Miss Sirius 9/24/06 . chapter 1
Ah! This story was amazing (as usual)! I really hope you keep writing it! :D
| cammy77 9/24/06 . chapter 1
loved it! so sweet and straight to the point! cant wait for the next chappie! as usual this is a fab bit of writing and keep it up!
| Elebridith 9/24/06 . chapter 1
I love your idea for the storyline and this first chapter has really given me a drive to read more. I want to read what happens with Hermione and Fred, why she chose Fred, how everyone reacts... I can't wait!. Excellentlt written, very lively... don't hesitate to update!
| Zippy-Wings 9/24/06 . chapter 1
Awesome chapter...I've never read a fred/hermione before...and now you've got me interested...update soon!
| YeahYouWannaKnowMyName 9/24/06 . chapter 1
this is not complete! complete means most of the suspence is gone not still -bye, a vary perplexed ruby red sunshine
| Mrs Charlie Weasley-thats me 9/24/06 . chapter 1
omg... update soon... finishit... PLEASE!