Reviews for Hotel Lobby
Hoshi-Naito 10/16/09 . chapter 1
There is nothing wrong with sappy romance. Especially when it's as kawaii as this! _ It was so adorable! Loved it!
Lyralocke 11/11/07 . chapter 1
I read this ages ago, loved it, and just stumbled across it again. I'm not usually one for AUs, but you pulled it off very well. You managed to convey a lot in just a oneshot, which is hard to do. Well done, all around.
Ayla The Librarian 7/3/07 . chapter 1
yay fluffy romance! i luv fluffy romance! great story!
xoVanilla-Bean 6/26/07 . chapter 1
Ek. Sorry, this review was kinda...late. xP I've read this before but I didn't have an account and I wasn't sure if you accepted anonymous reviews! Well, anyway...I thought it was really sweet, and I really liked it! I like all kinds of gushy-ness . And I was wondering if it was okay if I put this (and maybe 'Wheels On The Bus'...and more :D) on some of my favorites list. If that's ok with you!
Argent-Allure 4/30/07 . chapter 1
To Gray-Rain Skies:

Wow! This story was so heart-warming and sincere. It gave me that same warm and fuzzy feeling that you get sometimes when drinking hot cocoa on a cold winter day. I never really thought an AU could be that good, but you proved me wrong!

The whole piece just seems to flow from the beginning to the end in one smooth direction. I really liked how you connected the beginning sentence with the last one as well. Also, Sora and Kairi’s interactions seemed believable and genuine. I felt like I could picture Sora’s gentle smiles for Kairi. The cozy atmosphere of the hotel lobby really complimented the image too.

The story idea itself was excellent to begin with. Perfection is sort of a like a desert mirage in the way a person will think they’ve achieved it, yet that person is left even more desolate then before when he or she finds out that it’s fake. I mean there are just too many people nowadays that constantly try to strive for perfection and end up with miserable lives. It’s incredibly sad to watch those people live their lives too because you know that they could be happy if they just accepted things as they were, but they just can’t. They spend their entire lives searching for something that they will never get. Sorry for the emotional rant there, it’s just that I really loved your story’s message. It was just really beautiful and touching the way Kairi found her “perfection” in Sora’s “imperfection.”

I hope you continue to write more wonderful stories (though my fingers will probably cramp up from the lengthy reviews hehe)!

Argent-Allure
AirborneXZ 4/17/07 . chapter 1
That was beautiful. Well done.
Jdogg1264 1/20/07 . chapter 1
You say that you can only write this stuff like its a bad thing, but how can it be a bad thing when everytime i read one of these, at the end i cant help but smile endlessly. Great job with this one!
Inkbug 12/31/06 . chapter 1
Very cute, very well done. I'm a huge fan of Sora/Kairi but I haven't found all that many well written ones out there. Once again you've done a great job. I actually kind of wish this were a multi-chapter!
foxy crimefighta 11/22/06 . chapter 1
oh, that was wonderful! :D

i absolutely adored everything.
Tiffany 11/14/06 . chapter 1
That was SO beautiful! I felt so happy after reading this! Thank you so much for writing such an amazing piece! You really made my day. :D
ahnminh 11/6/06 . chapter 1
This is perfection.

Simply and utterly PERFECT.

This is the most

fabulous fic in the Hotel

Lobby challenge.

I find it adorable. I'm not

a big supporter of Sokai,

but it just might happen
twilighttries 11/6/06 . chapter 1
-Dances- Love! I love it! Excellent! :) Very, very, very nice.
Yu207 10/30/06 . chapter 1
"…and he kissed her."

He had to, because if he didn't, I'd punch him!

Another beautiful SK. Oh, I just love this couple.!
Violet Vendetta 10/29/06 . chapter 1
good descriptions. keep it up!
erinsailorditz 10/24/06 . chapter 1
um... yeah this one is my favorite! well, granted i havent read all your work -and i will!- but i think its my fav! its cute and the whole hotel lobby scenerio totally brilliant and satifying. excellent, excellent job!

erinsailorditz
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