sweet and twisted. loved it!

Poor Sirius. You should expand on this, it's really good. You could do Severus' POV and maybe even write a story of how they got together, their relationship up to this point, and/or what happens after this fic. Keep up the great writing.

This is the end? You're so evil!

O_O omg you cant end it there! That was really interesting but the biggest cliff hanger ever. It is down right cruel for you to end it right there. pwease

Nice job! The ending here is really, really good, and I'd be interested in a longer backstory...