Nyah~ I, erm, this, heh, just, your style and GO and it all fits together so wonderfully. I love how you depicted Crowley's last ditch efforts to leave the bookshop and his failing miserably. :3

Though I must say, I can very nearly see Aziraphale swaying his hips as he walks up the stairs in the end, which is both disturbing and hilarious at the same time. :]

Thank you so much for such a lovely story~

~Astral~

GUH the foreplay was painfully hilarious and well xD you know.

Seductive, I LOL XD

Nice job with that xD

...Somehow, I got this cute mental image of him sprouting wolf ears and a wolf tail at the "prowled after him" line. XD That was great.

THAT...was so wonderfully sensuous...I MUST inquire - did you break a law or two to write this? -laughs- Really, this is just TOO sexy. I was practically drooling onto my keyboard! Not to mention that I was tempted to lick my monitor. Absolutely delicious this piece of writing is. ♥

Your mastery of language is very pleasantly astonishing. I was FLOORED with how smooth and utterly seamless the flow of words are! And so very, VERY descriptive. I felt like such a voyeur, reading this! The images that were placed in my mind with the wonderful crafting of this piece...lovely beyond words. ♥

And may I be allowed to shamelessly say that Aziraphale in this bit of writing is sexy beyond belief. Lucky spoon. And even luckier Crowley!

I feel bad that I laughed so very hard at Crowley's dilemma in trying (and failing) to leave the bookshop. That paragraph was just PERFECT. I have to admit though, I was rather glad that his legs weren't obeying him. -laughs-

'Ngk!' is my favorite Crowley sound ever. I adore you for putting it in.

Faved this story like whoa. Thank you SO much for this jewel of a fic! ♥

I don't have much to add to that comment... everything said... in**incredible ^^ I love your style of writing!
Btw, my nickname doesn't seem very creative here, I know, but I actually call myself C. everywhere, so... hmm. whatever. ^^
Thx for the story - you just made my day ^^

Thoroughly enjoyable! Helpless Crowley is just too adorable. Your writing style is marvelous. Please write some more!