 Harley-Cat 4/30/09 . chapter 1Quite an interesting script. You had a couple of typos, but it was really good! the end just cuts out, though:/
Either way, excellent job with this.
-CAT |
 harleyQdoll 11/15/08 . chapter 1lol nice :] |
 TheBlackCatCrossing 11/4/06 . chapter 1Sweet lord!
That was deliciously written and very believable. Although this isn't exactly my favorite pairing, you pulled it off really nicely. The convos were spot on and I couldn't help anticipating what happened next. The part when Joker asks
*SPOILERS*
'... make love to me?'
just had me melt. I'm so glad someone finally made the Joker sensitive while still interested in Harley.
I give it a 7/10
1 point for going deeper into their symbiosis, 1 point for awesome writing, 1 for keeping it sexy (which is VERY HARD to do for me at least, specially with these two, but here have a cookie!) 1 for wit and three points for giving these two a bit of life and not making it a typical dime a dozen JHQ read. Bravo! |
 Girl-Anachronism89 12/24/04 . chapter 1Whats up with the ending? Why is it like that, it looks like theres supose to be more to it...
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"Dr. Quinzel: (smiles) Yes..
(some time before the last session. Dr. Quinzel"
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Is there more? |
 pretty moon kitty 4/10/04 . chapter 1What a sexy read! It was very engrossing. There were grammatical errors and spell checked words taken out of context, but it wasn't too distracting.
I love the way you portray Harley And Mr.J! Their personalities in your stories are completely believable. |
 Query 2/22/04 . chapter 1Very interesting. I like the progression from Harley being the doctor to her actually becoming Harley Quinn. You can really tell where her sanity is starting to slip.
I found the story Joker told to be very much him. It's the sort of thing he would do! When the car pulled up to get her, I could hear him say, "OOpsie!" right before tossing her out the window. |
 THE LIE 12/14/03 . chapter 1LOL I liked it ti was great! I love Harley Quinn shes soo great! She's all crazy! And Joker is the best villan in Batman go Joker! Waho. Well I liked it the gruseom story was great...im jsut a freak like that im glad he didnt end up fucking the dead though. Cus I thought that would be gross...lol istn that funny...well good godo i have to read more of urs tuff but its 2 am here and im off to bed night night
Lisa/Rogue77 |
 ProfessorSpork 9/22/03 . chapter 1this was another great one. the bloody gruesome story at the beginning was a bit much, though |
 Stephanie 6/14/03 . chapter 1 Cute story I liked it... |
 anon 2/6/02 . chapter 1 ...Joker...*sneers..*(J/K! ;-) cute story..) |