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| JokieStarchild 2006-11-04 ch 1, | abuseSweet lord!! That was deliciously written and very believable. Although this isn't exactly my favorite pairing, you pulled it off really nicely. The convos were spot on and I couldn't help anticipating what happened next. The part when Joker asks *SPOILERS* '... make love to me?' just had me melt. I'm so glad someone finally made the Joker sensitive while still interested in Harley. I give it a 7/10 1 point for going deeper into their symbiosis, 1 point for awesome writing, 1 for keeping it sexy (which is VERY HARD to do for me at least, specially with these two, but here have a cookie!) 1 for wit and three points for giving these two a bit of life and not making it a typical dime a dozen JHQ read. Bravo! |
| Girl-Anachronism89 2004-12-24 ch 1, | abuseWhats up with the ending? Why is it like that, it looks like theres supose to be more to it... - "Dr. Quinzel: (smiles) Yes.. (some time before the last session. Dr. Quinzel" - Is there more? |
| pretty moon kitty 2004-04-10 ch 1, | abuseWhat a sexy read! It was very engrossing. There were grammatical errors and spell checked words taken out of context, but it wasn't too distracting. I love the way you portray Harley And Mr.J! Their personalities in your stories are completely believable. |
| Query 2004-02-22 ch 1, | abuseVery interesting. I like the progression from Harley being the doctor to her actually becoming Harley Quinn. You can really tell where her sanity is starting to slip. I found the story Joker told to be very much him. It's the sort of thing he would do! When the car pulled up to get her, I could hear him say, "OOpsie!" right before tossing her out the window. |
| THE LIE 2003-12-14 ch 1, | abuseLOL I liked it ti was great!! I love Harley Quinn shes soo great! She's all crazy!! And Joker is the best villan in Batman go Joker!! Waho. Well I liked it the gruseom story was great...im jsut a freak like that im glad he didnt end up ** the dead though. Cus I thought that would be gross...lol istn that funny...well good godo i have to read more of urs tuff but its 2 am here and im off to bed night night ~Lisa/Rogue77~ |
| ProfessorSpork 2003-09-22 ch 1, | abusethis was another great one. the bloody gruesome story at the beginning was a bit much, though |
| Stephanie 2003-06-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseCute story I liked it... |
2002-02-06 ch 1, anon. | abuse...Joker...*sneers..*(J/K! ;-) cute story..) |