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| cecelle 2007-06-28 ch 1, | abuseHe sure did set something in motion... I like the way this starts out as a Sirius/James 'hijinks', but ends on a slightly ominous note. |
| Sol en la Noche 2006-09-27 ch 1, | abuseThat was a cute one. Dumbledore is always poking his nose where is probably doesn't belong. Most of the time, you only see fics where he is arranging romances or the fate of the last battle, but here you portray a simple interference that has great consequences. Great job! |
| Katharina-B 2006-09-25 ch 1, | abuseWell written, and an interesting idea about the start of the marauder's friendship. |
| scarlet dreamer 2006-09-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseexcellent little story love the ending |
| stars-n-moons91 2006-09-25 ch 1, | abuseI liked it! I would've liked to have known, though, what the miror and the string story was about... Good betas, too! ^_^ Keep up the amazing work, Stars |
| dansemacabre 2006-09-24 ch 1, | abuseI liked this brief glimpse into the past very much, since I'd always been curious about how Sirius, James and Remus became friends and what they did as students at Hogwarts. Also loved the ending, the little dark forshadowy bit re: Lupin being a werewolf and what that might mean for him and the friends he makes. I like the idea of Dumbledore being wise enough to forsee that and plan accordingly, it fits in very well with his character, IMO. |
| excessivelyperky 2006-09-24 ch 1, | abuseNice story. A great pity that Dumbledore was never concerned about what the four did to Slytherins, but at least Remus is protected. No matter who else ends up paying the price. |