THIS STORY IS GREAT!
Update soon!

cool story I really like it.

Lol, I know you've probably abandoned this story and all, but I was just looking around for something interesting to read, and this was the only other FMA fic on your profile, hehe. It was quite entertaining to read, lol. A whole lot better than my first fic. ;) If you get the urge to update this, I'll most certainly read it, but no pressure. I know what it's like to have people telling you to update something you really don't like anymore. That's been happening with my "Teach Me to Fly" story, hehe. Everybody likes it but me! *snickers* ((BTW, if you're one of those who like it, you're welcome to help by trying to help me fix it so that I like it, hehe. It'll totally have to be rewritten before I'll update it, because I really don't like the way it's going. :P))

In any case, hope to see an update on something or other soon. Take care, and have a nice day!

Melissa

Whoa...

2 words...

That.

was.

AWESOME.

Ok, 3, but you catch my drift! d: This is a REALLY good story! I love the plot and storyline! I'm anticipating the next chapter! Keep up the great work! (=

my name is jennifer lol

Please make more of this story its awesome

this story is great. I absolutly love it. Your character is great and the idea is so cool. UPDATE SOON!

I faux screamed twice. The first when i saw you updated, and the second when When Roy Mustang first said anything. Dude. This story is one of the best things I've read. Wow. You're so frickin' amazing! ^.~

Darn you and your little cliffhangers too! Man I love this story is funny cause it's true, and so confusing though.

Huzzah! You updated! Congrats! It wasn't taht short, it was pretty long in my standards.

First off, with Jennifer's character, you did very well at keeping her humna and sometimes useful as well as useless (forgive my rash words). I think I wouldve reacted the same in her position. You planned out her's and Ed's reactions quite talented while keeping them human.

It was a good point Ed brought up taht he shoudl take over Jen's body when they're in danger. She shoudl take his advice later. And you made Jen get made at Ed, which was good too, you didn't make her a crazy prefect little angel.

Now that crimson stone alchemist person who was described as a viosion of prefect beauty was strange. I wonder if she was just there for writing techniques or as a plot device later. I have a feeling more Mary Sues are too come for Ed. Was she a Mary Sue? She really freaked me out.

And I like how Ed and Jen are interacting so far. Just as aqquaintances who have just met! Keep up the work! And I love the cliff hanger! Beautifully done with Mustang! Will Armstrong or Winry find out? I hope they're in it too!

Hehe, I don't think I've ever seen a story quite like this before. I can't wait to see what happens next!

Constructive criticism, well, I guess Jennifer and Ed probably should have been more shocked. Then again, maybe it just hasn't quite hit them yet. Anyway, keep up the great work!

Wow... that is... different. This is a truely unique story. I never actually saw something like this before. Um... constructive critism... hm... uh...

Well it has a rather good beginning. It is a bit slow on some parts, but it is the first chapter. I somehow think they'd both, Ed and Jenifer, be a bit more panicky in a dituation like that. But what am I saying? It's not even in the plot and I'm trying to constructivly critise this...

I need more practice

Hopefully I'll give you something better next review!

I defintely agree with you, she is not a mary sue. And also, I second your motion to not put in romance. If a guy went into your mind, it definetly would not work between you two. He'd find out your secrets, and most likely you'd have to put up with each other adn become more like brother/sister.

So, I can't wait to see how Jen deals with Mary Sues. Name one fangirl something crazy like, I don't know, Sparkle or something

And I can't wait to see how Winry deals with this though she isn't one of my favourite characters I think she should be in this fanfiction.

Hopefully my story critc skills will have improved by next time!

(fixes herself after lauhing insanely on the floor) i TOTALLY agree with Wandering Hitokiri Ed in a girls body...lol. And u pulled it off big time. XP Congrats!
Ja Ne H.O.K.

0.0 poor Ed...I'm huge on FMA too.But I ain't got two nickels to rub together so I ain't got no merchandise.and I'm too stubborn to ask for something from my mom or dad...well,I'ma Thompson after all.Weird,I have an older sister named Jennifer who's sixteen.I call her Stalker since she spies on me and tries to get me in trouble all the time.and she calls me cat-violater...

Ah! This one's positively lovely, why is there only one chapter? Oh well. And you know what? You'd be the best author in the world to have those two fall in love. While they can FEL each other's feelings (As a third-party person who has no intrest in the situation) and pretty much hear everything they think. Ooer. Weird. Oh well, You'll somehow, magically, spontaniously pull it off. Like Woah. Yep. Okay, to the Fav's.