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| ILuvFLUFFYmarshmellows 2008-07-23 ch 1, anon. | abusewow you have got to be a great writer if you were able to invoke THAT much emotion in a story seriously im going to sound like a wuss but i started to cry as i was reading the scene where jin really starts to lose himself to his grief i normally dont shed tears but this little story honestly was that moving congrats :'D i was wondering though would you mind writing a one shot for a mugen/fuu? please? *puppy dog eyes* -ILuvFLUFFYmarshmellows |
| WildFire759 2008-06-30 ch 1, | abuseOnce again, very well-written and very heartbreaking. I hope you'll do more Samurai Champloo fanfics in the future :) I just can't get enough of them. |
| Colleen 2008-01-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseYou should do a Fuu/Mugen(or however you spell his name)one, All of the ones I can find aren't that great. Way to out of character...but there in lies the problem. |
| Colleen 2008-01-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseI cried! I don't cry when I read stories, but on both this one and Sweet Nothings I cried. You are very talented and very good at ending your stories in the saddest way possible, yet still have them be sweet and wonderfully happy endings. You have twisted death into a thing that grants wishes. |
| BlackWidow12 2008-01-11 ch 1, | abuseoh that was soo good :D |
| JxFxM 2007-12-29 ch 1, | abuse^_^ I loved it. End of story. |
| Kimeko-28 2007-11-11 ch 1, | abuseso beautiful! I usually am not fond of stories where my favorite characters die, but this was really wonderful. I love that it was from the perspective of Himawari... very creative. Anyhow- thanks again for the beautiful story ^^ -kim |
| Remini 2007-09-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseIt's two o'clock in the morning and I just wiped away my tears. This was beautiful, I was so happy when I noticed you wrote a sequel to Sweet nothings. It was really pretty and well written. I'm looking forward to your next works. Good luck!! |
| Shari Joy Rose 2007-09-24 ch 1, | abuse'a bit sad?' I cried my frikken eyes out! Lol.. at least they're finally together. Maybe you can write another SC story where the main characters don't die? That'd be awesome - though you know I love this story and Sweet Nothings - just left an impossibly long review on that one so I'll keep this one short. Sorta. Himawari to Mugen, "You're nothing but a dirty old man!" I died laughing. |
| Kaoru4 2007-08-26 ch 1, | abuseI went and read sweet nothings and then immediately went on to read this story. Amazing. So moving and emotional. I've been holding back tears this entire time and then this ending... was so well written and good. Great job! Jin's love was palpable through the story and my heart just wrenched everytime I read a scene with him in it because his character just seemed to flow with raw emotion. ^^ |
| LulayLullaby 2007-08-21 ch 1, | abuseI cried like a baby. -E- |
| StupefiedNarutard 2007-06-11 ch 1, | abuseOh dear goodness, I'm crying!! >w< I loved every single minute of it and I think you are a perfect writer! This was so touching... I could definitely see this happening. Your characterization of Mugen and Jin as older men was perfect in my opinion and I'm very glad that you wrote this... But I'm still crying! UWAAH! Your writing was so inspirational and I just can't even begin to explain. Thank you so much for sharing this beloved story! lovelovelovelove, stupefiedNarutard |
| Girl-who-sings-the-blues 2007-04-16 ch 1, | abuse...Woot! It is a sequel! Aw...Himawari...You know I loved it how it started as her as a little girl to to an grown woman...(It was fun to see Jin act like a dad...sending that boy away!) And it was great for you to elaborate more on "Sweet Nothings"...I really loved that story... But yeah--I understand what you mean in your Author Notes about the irony of the happy ending--I got you completely (misspelled?-he he he)Jin finally got what he wanted...although Himawari knew it and had to let him go... Over all it was beautifuly written and Thank you so much for writing it and posting it up...(I didn't even know it was there! I had just decided to take a look at Sweet Nothings again...Woot! And it 's been a while...) I really enjoyed reading 'The Sunflower Princess'...may many other good works of fiction come to you in the near future! |
| anonymous 2007-03-31 ch 1, anon. | abusebooteeful. :*) |
| Saiera 2007-03-04 ch 1, | abuseJust after I'd regained my composure from Sweet Nothings, this one hit me XD Again, beautifully written! I love the visuals I get from reading your work :) |