 Phish Tacko 2008-01-29 . chapter 6Some peeps is weird... |
 Freebird87 2007-07-31 . chapter 7I like Simon and Garfunkel. The Graduate is a good film. |
 Freebird87 2007-07-31 . chapter 5Seals & Crofts is a great band. I like their song "Summer Breeze." |
 Freebird87 2007-07-31 . chapter 4The last part of the chapter was so touching. |
 Freebird87 2007-07-31 . chapter 3Did you make up that virus? Or is it real? |
 Freebird87 2007-07-31 . chapter 1Wow, feminists are hypocritical. |
 emeraldeyegurl 2006-11-10 . chapter 14bravo. good ending even though u can add another chapter if u want. But it still makes sense to end here though. I like the family dinner and such. So is Marlene still going in the beauty pagent? I want to know. Good advice in this story. thanks for writing it for everyone to enjoy. well bye. :-) |
 emeraldeyegurl 2006-11-10 . chapter 13Good story. good family moments. Kinda confusing about Doc's age and all but i half way kinda get it. well thanks. bye. :-) |
 emeraldeyegurl 2006-11-10 . chapter 12It was another funny chapter. I liked the part about the habitual words and the switch in 18 of habitual words. Keep up the good work on these. thanks. bye. :-) |
 emeraldeyegurl 2006-11-10 . chapter 11It was funny in some parts
1) when young Marty said they may run into each other in the future sometime and old Marty said or in the past. The Docs said that in 55
2) That meeting your parents when they were teens is an educational experience-- said my Marlene. Young Marty said that to Lorraine in 55.
make it more funny. I like the humor u put in there. thanks for writing. bye. :-) |
 emeraldeyegurl 2006-11-10 . chapter 2It has been a good story so far. One little correction though, its not that important but i think it should be called a hovercar and not just a car. They have hovercars then. well continue writing. thanks. bye. :-) |
 Lucile Lunatic Loves Alucard 2006-09-27 . chapter 3Please make more chapters i will help! |
 Lucile Lunatic Loves Alucard 2006-09-25 . chapter 1Please, Please make som more and TY for mentioning me! |