So did Yayoi, Yuiko, and Shinome actually die at the end of the anime? I always thought that was a dream...

So Soubi did kill them and he killed Ritsuka... but he made sure to kill himself first... How Shakespearan... Not in a bad way mind

...even if it was made-up that wasn't a good ending...First of all: Still many questions remain. Second: Yuiko, Shinonome, Yaiyo, and Shuiko( whoever that is ) don't really die, it was just a dream and he saw all of them the same day or something and they were fin and going home and stuff. Thrid: In the anime his mother died not that Shuiko person, Duh. Fourth: HOW COULD YOU MAKE THEM DIE! I HATE YOU FOR THAT!... not really but*puts imaganirny cat ears down on head* How could you.. ? Fifth: Semei would die if his fighter dies. It's in the rules. Sixth: Soubi WOULD'T kill Ritsuka, he would die WITHOUT Ritsuka, probably, but he doesn't, I think, in the manga( so far... on volmue 6 finshed watching the anime.)Sorry for complaing, but I had to, cause the ending sorta sucks, but hay... How i'm I to tell you how to write your story. I mean it's yours' so yeah just saying... don't hate me...*whimper and puts cat ears down father(IF THAT'S POSABLE!)

-Sonya;P

Wow, very good! I really liked it, and it was so heart wrenching!

It kind of makes you look at poor Ritsuka. He's practically abused in some way by very close to him,(Bsdies the ones that die in this fic) His mother beats him, his brother wants him dead, and Soubi actually kills him... I feel so sorry for poor Ritsuka.

Ah, well RIP Loveless. RIP Beloved

Cheers

Crmy

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H'omg! -eyes watering-

That was really, really sad, but really well written. I have to agree- the last episode was pretty bad. Oh, man... now I'm going to be thinking about Soubi and Ritsuka all day!

Two things, though. First of all, the footnotes were a bit annoying, kind of taking away from the overall story. The other is that I don't know if Soubi would really kill Ritsuka. But if he did, I can see it going this way.

Awesome.

O.O...wow...Soubi kept his promise and managed to follow orders...wow...O.O there isn't much to say except wow...this was a good fic...wow...I'm kinda somewhat speechless...Keep being...wow-inducing...

love,

Rin

RITSUKA'S AN ALCOHOLIC! *cough* Who said that? ... This is a really strange fic, but good none the less.

love,

Rin

OMG! I hope Soubi didn't REALLY kill them! I can't think of him as a killer *shakes head*

love,

Rin

I don't like Ritsuka's mommy...she a bitch. *sings 'kyle's moms a bitch' from South park* hehe, this was a good chapter, I can feel that he was guarding himself to keep the pain from tearing him limb from limb in front of his mom. Truly sad :(

love,

Rin

hm...intriguing (sp?) I shall read on!

love,

Rin

Awesomeness! I liked the ending a lot! Great story!

well written

the ending was sad though (

but i really enjoyed this fic

it feels like it could really be ep 13 :D

...how sad...*sniff* poor soubi and ritsuka

me likey

aw.. its such a sad but still beautiful story..

Really gret story you have going. I believe the place the picture was taken was in Yokohama...I may be wrong but I'm pretty sure of myself. Anyway, I hope another chapter is posted soon. It's really good!

-pl