holy $h!t this is awesome man (just quitely and on the D.L. id rank this story up there with the likes of sanae and cricketchick1990 ;) )get yer update on! i want MORE!1

I love it... you should do a tak/shi story...along with takeshi driving a new powerful gtr.

Tak/Shi. IT's nicer... Ouch...poor,poor, Takeshi. If I had (or if my character had) been there, I would have buried myself in Ryosuke's chest and begged him not to let Takeshi die. Somehow, I pity the guy more than I pity Shingo. I hope you don't decide to toss him into an asylum, though! That would make me cry. (Don't get me wrong...Takeshi's a good friend, that's all...)

GASP!

I think I love you. XD Nakazato is my favorite and doesn't get NEARLY enough love. I would LOVE to see this turn into a Shingo/Takeshi slash fic. You don't see too many of them. I wrote one way back in april, but... yeah.

I think you should go for it!

Wow, this is really good for something you claim to be your first!

Anyway, the trauma and all the mental stress on Nakazato is cool. It pretty much fits in with the original plot, and the idea of a schitzo (forgive me if I don't get the spelling right) Nakazato is a bit strange but still doable.

And no, I don't think you should pair them up. It's fine as it is...

This fan fic is great update faster

Jeez, talk about your nasty dark sides. Still, I can't really bring myself to pity Shingo. Update again soon!

_ Love it. I hope you update soon.

I definately would like to see Nakazato get more screen time, and I like the premise of this fic, so please update soon :)

I really would not want to ne on the road with Zack when he's like that. Please update soon.