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| Molecular 12 2007-12-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseKool, i like it. I agree, jesse has been hurt too much to not know. i agree with the part of loving the others so much n wanting to take there hurt, but i think that he wants to c there good in ppl, n tho he knows the betrayal is coming he hopes for the good in ppl to come through. N e ways, haha great story. btw jesse's a MOLECULAR haha, brennans the elemental, just so ya no. n e ways, good ideas. tootles. |
| bohemianbabe 2006-10-11 ch 1, | abusetalent to the extreme! Keep on writing, you are very good at this! |
| aniki19 2006-10-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseaww...poor jesse... i think u've captured a good moment of vulnerability in jesse... but then again,i'm biased. i love a hurt/angsty jesse...so yeah..tis story rocks! |
| Molecular 12 2006-09-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseOMGosh! I LOVE IT! ABSOLUTELY GREAT STORY! That is so JESSE, he would do ANYTHING for the others! And I agree totaly that Jesse must no, cuz he gets hurt so often that there has to be method to his madness, lol. Anyways, great story, one glitch tho, Jesse is a Molecular, not an elemental (u said elemental in the story)! I really wish they would at least finish off the series! GREAT STORY, if n e more comes i will definitely read it! Tootles! |