Nice story! Loved the idea about Ichigo getting paralyzed- not many authors like handy- capping the main charcaters so I love it when someone does xD The only thing I'm wondering about is why soul society was out to kill the two of them. Was it there instead of the soul society arc where Rukia got kidnapped? Or was it something else and I just missed it?

great job!! I Loved it!! i look forward to read your future stories! keiko

who's kinchiki? do you mean kuchiki? it's kinda urm...not very interesting for some couples chapters

How sad :-(

Ichigo, Rukia and Kon died which is pretty sad. Byakuya cried which is very unusual and you spelled his last name wrong. Byakushi crying isn't pretty bad but actually pretty nice and kawaii.

This is a pretty good story though sad because of the characters dying. You did a really awsome job! ^_^

O.o That is a sad ending... xD No offence, but the story didn't really have a plot... It was short. Looked like it was rushed. Anyways, it was still sad, and you spelled Kuchiki wrong. xP

Okay, let's start with the good things. One, Hyou really liked this ending; very good. Killing Ichigo is something I don't know I can pull off; I'm trying to though. Good job with the plot; it was short, but enjoyable.

Now, the one thing that irked me with your last chapter the the improper naming of Bya-chan. It is "Kuchiki", not "Kinchiki". I still think you have the potential of improvement, which, through time will lead to more complex stories with longer chapters. I look forward to reading anymore Bleach writings you plan on releasing, and if you need any help, PM me (I enjoy helping, it's good to know someone might pay attention to the advice I give). Good luck in the future, and nice story. :D

Woah, random long paragraph. I think it would've been better to give some space to that... make it less confusing. Also, very very random flying and return of the Grand Fisher. But it's interesting. Hm... waiting for the next chap. Keep writing!

Oops, I guess my comment was a little too late!

Oh... so exciting. Just one thing tho- you made a tiny spelling mistake. It's Kuchiki. I also sincerely doubt that Renji would be doing such a thing to Rukia, but it certainly makes an interesting story.

I think this is your longest chapter yet. You left off at a good place, but I still think you could've added a tiny little bit more. I'm probably sounding demanding; it's just that I'm not used to reading short chapters, they make me want more. How you got Grand Fisher to team up with the shinigami, I have no idea... unless it's another robot from Soul Society. Update soon. :D

uh. nice! but don't quite understand the flying ichigo. btw, inoue called ichigo, kurosaki-kun not ichigo. i'm starting to hate renji even more!
oh yeah, kon called rukia, onee-san. not rukia~
just telling ya

This story is great Thanks for reveiwing mine

YAY! You updated! The same thing happened to my computer so it's okay. Anyways, it's interesting that Ichigo cried. I wanna find out what happens next really soon! *hint hint*

Well, I'm seeing a lot of improvements from last time. Now ya just need ta lengthen up your chapters. Update soon.