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| Tacpebs 2007-10-19 ch 6,  | abuseThis story was awesome! Great read! Who! |
| JazzyIrish 2007-10-18 ch 10, | abuseFantastic story. Again, so glad I could read it in one sitting. I just loved the way you weaved the past week (backstory) into the present day hunt. Very well done. I must say that the hunt itself was extremely creative. Poor Dean was really in bad shape during all of it. Sam was on his own throughout much of the tale - right up until he was put into the pictures and Dean had to rescue him. The OCs in the pictures were quite good - you made me care about them enough that I felt a loss at their deaths or rejoiced that they made it back. Loved the humorous banter between the brothers - laughed many times. Fabulous storytelling and I like your portrayal of the brothers very much - true to character with wonderful dialogue/banter. Thanks for sharing this wonderful tale with us. I look forward to reading more from you. Until next time... |
| Clone Trooper 2007-08-21 ch 10, | abuse*applauds* Excellent ending to an excellent story! Everything in this fic was SPOT ON, from the characterizations, to the awesome ghost plot! Kudos! |
| Clone Trooper 2007-08-21 ch 9, | abuseWow. Burn the *whole* motel down? Drastic. And I'm *sorry* but I'm sort of glad that Richard's dead... But I'm saddened that Dylan died! Waah! |
| Clone Trooper 2007-08-21 ch 8, | abuseThis is *such* an interesting concept! I'm loving it! Kudos, kudos kudos!! And the boys are awesome. :) |
| Clone Trooper 2007-08-21 ch 7, | abuseEVIL HAWKINS! Deano, if you were feeling better I'd ask you to beat his shebs! How are they going to get out now...? |
| Clone Trooper 2007-08-21 ch 6, | abuseOi. Things just go from bad to worse. Looks like Sam's ability to be the optimist just took a blow! :P |
| Clone Trooper 2007-08-21 ch 5, | abuseThose guards BETTER cover the brothers' tracks. Hm... Ghost induced flu? |
| Clone Trooper 2007-08-21 ch 4, | abusePoor, sick, little Dean. Having the flu *stinks*, especially on a hunter, I'm sure. Dean's reactions to the people in the pictures is hysterical! He's not freaked out at all! |
| Clone Trooper 2007-08-20 ch 3, | abuseDEAN! Haha! I LOVE him talking to the lady. I can TOTALLY see him doing that! |
| Clone Trooper 2007-08-20 ch 2, | abusePoor, sleepy Dean. He gets his recompense for slipping laxatives into the coffee!! Poor guy. And what a creepy spirit. |
| Clone Trooper 2007-08-20 ch 1, | abuseHahahaha! Dean is a HOOT! "Sam! The pictures are MOVING!" That mental image is about to make me pop a lung from laughing so hard! |
| aussiemel1 2007-06-30 ch 10, | abuseBoy, I really enjoyed this story. You had me sucked in from the first chapter with Dean insisiting the photos were moving, that was bloody funny, driving Sam to distraction. And it turned out to be true! Great job. |
| xsilicax 2007-06-06 ch 10, | abuseThis was excellent! Well plotted, well characterised and excellent use of humour. I just read it in one sitting, couldn't put it down. Cathy. |
| Anime's-mistress 2007-05-08 ch 10, | abuseI could definitely see this as a real episode. You did especially well detailing that chaotic escape from the motel. Great job. C: |