Yeah! I really like your story, hahahaah! I love it when nuriko feels like that! ,i'm just going to say this for the best of your story okay? "I hope miaka and tamahome would be apart"- just a little naughty thinking of me.hehe..but in the true story ,i really want miaka and tamahome together,forever,but for your story,.. it's another one, since your story is about nuriko's love,would he and miaka get together?Wooohh! Please update your story to the end:):)

YOU ARE SO RIGHT!They are a beautiful couple.but,i think nuriko is letting his feelings spurt out at once,"how do i say this?"miaka must do something that would really let nuriko burst out his feelings for her, because from what i observed nuriko,is most likely not to"go with the flow for his feelings" you know what i mean,it's just,it's not totally NURIKO at all,don't get offended.It's just i'm so confused that nuriko,would be open to her that much,you know:)but still i like your story,keep up d good work

Hello! Shallowlil! Your story was great! Can I write a story about Morin and Fuu in the book with Morin as the Priestess of Suzaku and Fuu as the Priestess of Seiryuu?

love it

I love your fanfic.

I've read all the chapters, when will you publish the next one?

This chapter was great, like all the chapter you published until now. But I can't wait to see what happens next, so please update soon.

Love this story!Hope you update soon!Coz I love this story so so much!Looking forward for the next!

Ack! Where's the next chapter? Please update soon!

love it

i love this please update i must know what happens with nuriko and miaka

i love your story! ^_^

Tetsuya took the quote from the book. "...said the girl's older brother in a loud voice. Period.”

Keisuke became stary eyed as he realized the excitement of what was happening. “Then that means WE'VE become characters in ‘The Universe of the Four Gods!’”

this has always been my favorite part! he's acks the way i would!

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Miaka shook her head. “I didn’t think so till now. Tamahome is unconscious but Nuriko is awake and helping my mother get dinner ready.”

Yui paused for a moment as she heard Mrs. Yuuki shout at Nuriko. “No! That’s not safe for the microwave!”

Suddenly, there was an explosion on the other end of the phone. “Miaka!” Yui cried out.

“It’s ok, I’m okay… but our microwave just bit the dust! I gotta go Yui.”

i love this part! it make's the story so much funner! XD

YAY! Thank you for updating! I love the chapter! Hope you update soon! Good luck! :3

Hmm .. well, I never expected Nuriko AND Tamahome to come to Miaka's world. And Yui's weird interest in Tamahome is starting to make me wonder ...

I really loved this story, and am glad to see it was updated. Please, keep up the good work!

This is getting good! Miaka and Nuriko finally hook up. Wo! I do feel a little bad for Tamahome, though. Oh well.