I liked how it had both elements of a short story and a poem. I thought it made everything seem more beautiful, that it made the end more beautiful and touching. And I like that Heero only spoke Japanese because it did give the story/poem another aspect.

And all I gotta say to this it can't be a poem thing is Beowulf. Unless my teacher lied and it really was just a story written in an annoying format. :)

TL

Oh, very good. Not too long, and not too erghm .. over-continued?

Yes. To favs.

Good luck!

aww dats so pwetty. giggle. i love it

You do quite well at poetry! There's different types of poetry. At least you don't write epic poems because they're just to long! And I love this anyway!

KAWAII! Sugoi! Keep writing!

That was so sweet! It was really, really good!

Great story, somewhat sad for Duo. Very intense.

This was amazing.

poem or story, this is as great as all your other works.

Oh that was sweet. 1x2 always.

You are awesome! I love everything of yours I've ever read! I wish I had half your talent! You rule! This fic/poem ruled! Keep up the good work! _