   ElektricStorm 2007-04-12 . chapter 8This is great. Keep going! |
| miniMimi 2007-02-18 . chapter 8 I love the story! Please continue it! |
| mindreader208 2006-10-11 . chapter 8 Heh, heh... Johnny has gotta be careful! But yeah, Roger has been acting like a jerk for a while now, but I'm sure you'll tell why later! ^^ Anyway, great chapter! Please update soon!
Woah, Roger is going to the Life! Wait, then Johnny can met Mark and Collins! ^^ ...Although he might not be in the mood...
Eh, whatever.
Please update soon!
~*~mindreader208 |
| freedomfighter82 2006-10-10 . chapter 8 Good job, Johnny. This was good. Keep it up! |
| mindreader208 2006-10-08 . chapter 7 Aw! Poor Roger! He's so confused... Oh, you should have everyone spy on him and find out about his sic. in some heated moment and then jump out. Just an idea... Don't use it if you don't want to.
Anyway, great chapter! Please update soon!
~*~mindreader208 |
| freedomfighter82 2006-10-07 . chapter 7 ...Roger's being a real dickhead.
And what is up with Roger's past. I really hope this gets unconfusing fast.
Not that it isn't good! I just don't like being confused. However, I trust you. For now... |
| mindreader208 2006-10-05 . chapter 6 LOL. This is... Great! What can I say?
Ah, your killing me! I know you have an excuse but its so insane for me to wait! ITS KILLING ME!
UPDATE SOON! IN THE NAME OF RENT AND FANTASTIC 4!
Please.
~*~mindreader208 |
| Tricia 2006-10-04 . chapter 6 *wonders how Roger felt and acted when Ben picked him up* |
| freedomfighter82 2006-10-03 . chapter 6 Lol. Nice. Good job! |
| Tricia 2006-10-03 . chapter 5 Roger seems to be a double-jerk in this chapter, because he wants to leave his RENT friends for the FF, and also because he doesn't want to tell the FF that he has AIDS. |
| Juliet 2006-10-02 . chapter 1 Okay, maybe I'm biased because I'm a huge Rent-head, but this story totally does not work. You're a good writer, but trying to fit these two totally different genres together is a train wreck. |
| freedomfighter82 2006-10-02 . chapter 5 Umm...this really doesn't make much sense. Now Roger's being a sell-out? I thought he was just going to live there for a couple of days. He's moving in permanently? What an **. The Bohos have done all this for him, he's finally turning his life around, and he's leaving them? Yeah, he ran away to Santa Fe, but you like you said, he couldn't handle it. It was well-written, but this turn of events doesn't make any sense. |
| Tricia 2006-10-02 . chapter 1 "Longtime friend of Richards, Benjamin Grimm, was super strength."
The word after "Grimm" should be "has" instead of "was". |
 ModernBohemianMuse 2006-10-01 . chapter 4once again...
i cant wait for more...
update soon!
mBm |
| freedomfighter82 2006-10-01 . chapter 4 That damn Reed. Lol. I still love this story. Johnny and Roger are the perfect duo. Teehee. More!! |
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