 Talitha Koum 7/30/06 . chapter 1I think you did a great job! And I don't know why I like the pairing. Maybe it had something to do with when I was younger. Seven years ago, I think. I was up late because I couldn't sleep in a bed I wasn't familiar with (visiting family far away)...so I turned on the tv. And lo and behold. There was the first and second eps of Gundam Wing. You know, I don't even like amine all that much. But there was just something about this one. And as I sat in the dark, watching this unfeeling boy and this curious girl, I was uncharacteristically drawn to the story line. Since I was so young, I'd never seen such a thing as a young woman wanting to confront someone who wanted to kill her. I was glued to the spot. And, since we left for home the next morning, I had to endure months of wondering what on Earth would happen to the two of them before Cartoon Network aired where I liived. So maybe that's why I like the two of them. Because they were the cause of my sleepless nights long ago. _ Boy, that's a long review. And, again, you did very well. I enjoyed it. |
 Omnicat 2/17/06 . chapter 1Well, that's the first canon following story I've ever read that kept them in character this well. You did a really good job, although I think Relena was still a bit too sappy. For the avid yaoi fan you make yourself out to be, though, it was just great! It's really a pity this one is proclamed 'dead'. |
 Naughty or Nice 8/28/05 . chapter 1 You're a yaoi writer? Wow that was really good for someone of your talents. :) Please do continue. |
 ShadowWolfXN 7/18/04 . chapter 1 Being a non-yaoi fan, and an even greater HY/RP fan, I think the author portrayed the chars perfectly. Heero was especially in-character, and I definatly would like Arigatomina to continue the fic... In all honesty, dump the yaoi crap and go non-yaoi all the way!There are more H/R fans out there than H/D fans anyway.:P Seriously, though, for a yoai author, the fic was well written.G/J, lez see a sequel! -SwolfXN |
 anonymis 3/29/02 . chapter 1 I think that was probably the best Heero and Relena story i have read. The way you follow the storyline and keep them in charater is great in my opinion. Everything you wrote Heero to think would sound exactly something he would think and goes the same for Relena. I have read plenty of story's where they are so out of charater it makes me want to throw up. They don't even follow the storyline for endless waltz or the series. So i think your story is the best i have read so far. Please, please, continue the story and don't change a thing in your writing style with this story. Good Job! |
 sarah 11/19/01 . chapter 1 i really like it you need to write more |
 AnkaraStark 7/3/01 . chapter 1This story was well written. I'm looking forward to reading the continuation. Please continue! |
 Cat 6/16/01 . chapter 1 i liked it. i hope you get the next part out soon. |
 Vash The Humanoid Sunshower 6/15/01 . chapter 1This is very well written. You shift between viewpoints very well and definatley stay true to the characters. Quality! |
 Samurai24 6/14/01 . chapter 1 Keep it going. There are not too many stories of Relena & Heero that are in character. |
 Brenda Bronson 6/14/01 . chapter 1 Hey I liked this story. It's one of the first story's I've read that keep the character's in the theme of the series. Keep up. Hope to see more.
Brenda |
 xxLiLbutterflyChinaPowerxx 6/14/01 . chapter 1KEWL |
 Baby 6/14/01 . chapter 1 Heero/Relena fan right here! How are ya? i tho8ught htis was really good! |
 Kaylie 6/14/01 . chapter 1I tolerated the blasphemy of 1xr *JUST* because you wrote it. And I must admit, If I were to forget how wonderful 1x2 is, this is pretty sweet and in character. I like it |
 Little Rini 6/14/01 . chapter 1I love it. Please continue. . |