dude. this is good.

at first it's kind of like, typical, but it goes from typical to awesome fast. and the last few lines are great.

especially the last one.

but pyro's hot, so it's okay. :D haha. good job, i really like this.

poor jubilee

Great story. I, liked how Jubilee tries to be good, but it's just not that easy. And BTW, Pyro=Hot=VERY hard to resist.;-)

Really good story, I´m a huge Pyro/Jubilee fan and I loved the way you gave a reason for her not to have had a bigger part in the movies. I hope to read more from you soon!

I like the how you wrote it, like the format...if that makes sense. Almost a little sad at the end. "Now, she just wishes there was someone left to believe in. She wishes there was still a reason to be good."
But great once again.

This was a great story. I love Pyro/Jubilee, and it's sad because not many people write it. My favorite part is the very last sentence. I hope you do some sort of follow-up!

Wow, great one-shot. If you ever do a backstory about this story, I'd certainly read it. You're writing is excellent and refreshing. Congrats on a job well done.

I really liked it! lol but i guess that shouldn't be much of a surprise coming from me, since i've told you before how much i love your fics. I can't wait to read more from you! so write new fics or updates old ones please! *hint**hint* *nudge**nudge*

This was a very good story. I hope to read more from you.