 Hyper-Crazed-Girl 2008-01-19 . chapter 2Yy! Love the story! Please continue^^ I really like whats happening with princess Anita here ^^ |
 wind-master-redmoon 2007-07-06 . chapter 2ohh not bad but you really should make tyson defy science. that would fuuny. oh and i hope that the King Hitoshi will actually fall for Princess Anita. & Kai for Tyson. & the other way around. an example is tyson see's that kai is actually really good. Kai see's how nice tyson is. |
 Audra Kaiba Advent ID 001 2006-11-12 . chapter 2Well I would help you bake more cookies but why would I flame such an excellent story? I really enjoy reading your writing and hope you update soon. Good luck! |
 StormyFlame 2006-10-15 . chapter 2Its really good please update soon, i really want to see what you write next :3 |
 Eyedentity Crysis 2006-10-12 . chapter 2Good update. Can't wait for the next. Cya! |
 Akira of the Twilight 2006-10-12 . chapter 2*raises hand and jumps up and down* I know! I know! You changed their ages and if I remember correctly, in the previous story Tyson didn't give Kai his name, or he did, but we didn;t see it, or I don't remember it. *sheepish grin* I am sure about the age thing though.
Are there going to be more added scenes or this just revamping the chapters?
Good luck Kay! |
 StormyFlame 2006-09-28 . chapter 1Hey. It's a shame you took it down to re-post it but it's still a brill fic anyway :) hope you update soon!! ~SF~ |
 Eyedentity Crysis 2006-09-26 . chapter 1Oo That's one messed up reviewer. But~!
This sounds good. ^^ I like it! So update soon, and we'll see how well you can re-do things. Ja ne~! |
 horsegirl 2006-09-25 . chapter 1 cant wait for the story to go on |