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RedheadLVR
2009-11-19 . chapter 12
This story is super great
Jane Q. Doe
2009-07-18 . chapter 12
Mr. Cuddy's been in surgery for a year! :) I'd love to see what will happen next...
A. Heiden
2009-06-12 . chapter 1
any more please? prety please?
Sinister Scribe
2009-05-07 . chapter 12
this is the first house fanfiction i've read in over six months and only you could have ever pulled me back into the fold, honey.

I love this story, i love your writing and i demand more goddamnit!

keep it up, kitten.

ciao for now

$cribe
G.Queen
2009-03-19 . chapter 12
are you going to finish it?
please do it!
;)
BB
2009-03-12 . chapter 12
Such a sweet story... I really hope you get around to the next chapter! I'll be waiting, :)
steph
2009-01-24 . chapter 12
i really hope that you haven't given up on this fic, it's too good! please continue!! i keep going back and rereading, i'd love to see a new chapter!!
xNakuranaisax
2009-01-20 . chapter 12
your killing us -_-

this story is awsome, keep up the work :]

HUDDY!!
InuChan7979
2009-01-08 . chapter 12
ur story is amazing! Extreme Wow quality. i cant wait to read so more.
ebilafan
2009-01-06 . chapter 12
Hey! Seems like I'm your first '09 reviewer - well, at least in this fic.
So, just wanted to let you know that this probably one of the best-written Huddys I've ever read, so do plz carry on! Update?*puppy eyes*
steph
2008-12-19 . chapter 12
wow, this is really good, good plot and character development . . . i so hope you'll be updating again, i wanna see more
EVIL WORLD DOMINATOR
2008-12-15 . chapter 12
wow! this is a great story, please update soon!!
BookWorm848@yahoo.com
2008-12-13 . chapter 3
“I try and schedule myself for clinic duty at least once a week, but sometimes I’m too busy."

Another one! I've even seen this on t-shirts. "Bomb Squad - If you see me running try and keep up."

It should be "try to" this one isn't even acceptable in verbal communication like "anyways" is.

BookWorm848
BookWorm848@yahoo.com
2008-12-13 . chapter 1
“Anyways, you need to see at least three more patients before you leave today,” she said in her best administrative tone of voice.”

ARG! You are far FAR too talented a writer to make this mistake. Therefore I'm working under the assumption that you do not realize you've made one. Anyway does not end in an “s.”

Spoken, yes occasionally you can say anyways; I believe it to be a regional accent type thing. However in writing it should never occur. Yes, you are writing dialogue. I don't care. The character would not have said that. I've only EVER heard this word spoken in such a manner by people under thirty, usually much younger.

Please believe my compliments on your writing skills. Your plots are well paced, your dialogue is engaging and in character, and your grammar excellent. Thank you for sharing your hard work with me. I enjoy reading it.

BookWorm848
emzypemzy
2008-11-23 . chapter 12
I absolutely loved this story, eagerly awaiting the next installment!
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