I liked this. Very creative.

i found it very kool

how do i discribe thee! a writer? no a great writer... no a terrific, outstanding writer! i loved it but i couldn't get the fourth chapter up. loved it!

Love M&L forever

Night's Fallen Angel

i really liked the story

it is unusual

and sad

and happy all at the same time

Wow. Just...WOW. I was - literally - on the edge of my seat as I clicked from page to page! Awesome story! Excellent piece of work!

this is a really good story mayb you can do a follow up on all the havok that magneto is causing, and maybe have the x-men unite with the brotherhood to destroy the nano's

Ha! Great ending! Bittersweet, but great! Good writing!

Good ending. I really liked this story.

Dude! that was so cool! power to aussies! (sorry, getting carried away with my heritage.. ::grin::) but neway, i loved the series, and cannae wait till you write more stuff! toodle pip! -Kate

Jean? What's going on? Write more quick!

it's another cliffhanger and I think you know the drill right now. So i don't think I'll waste precious typing time by typing out the dramatic music. It's routine. ::grin:: aw what the heck, DUN DUN DAAAAAAAAAAAA! done. o)

Oooo, dat's creepy...all this back-stabbing and mutant-eating-nanos is makin' me itch...uh oh...

aw man... keep going! Write more FAST!

AAAARRRGGGGHHH! NO! It can't be! Please continue! PLEASE!

I feel this requires another you-know-what. ::draws breath:: DUN DUN DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!