 Tyria 8/3/02 . chapter 11 I liked this. Very creative. |
 midnight248 4/14/02 . chapter 11i found it very kool |
 night's Fallen Angel 2lazy2signin 4/2/02 . chapter 11 how do i discribe thee! a writer? no a great writer... no a terrific, outstanding writer! i loved it but i couldn't get the fourth chapter up. loved it!
Love M&L forever
Night's Fallen Angel |
 Kelly 10/4/01 . chapter 11 i really liked the story
it is unusual
and sad
and happy all at the same time |
 SocialHermit 9/24/01 . chapter 5Wow. Just...WOW. I was - literally - on the edge of my seat as I clicked from page to page! Awesome story! Excellent piece of work! |
 Aaron Arthur 9/14/01 . chapter 11 this is a really good story mayb you can do a follow up on all the havok that magneto is causing, and maybe have the x-men unite with the brotherhood to destroy the nano's |
 Kit Thespian 8/28/01 . chapter 11Ha! Great ending! Bittersweet, but great! Good writing! |
 Ares 8/10/01 . chapter 11 Good ending. I really liked this story. |
 Kalgoorlie 8/10/01 . chapter 11Dude! that was so cool! power to aussies! (sorry, getting carried away with my heritage.. ::grin::) but neway, i loved the series, and cannae wait till you write more stuff! toodle pip! -Kate |
 Kit Thespian 7/25/01 . chapter 10Jean? What's going on? Write more quick! |
 Kalgoorlie 7/25/01 . chapter 10it's another cliffhanger and I think you know the drill right now. So i don't think I'll waste precious typing time by typing out the dramatic music. It's routine. ::grin:: aw what the heck, DUN DUN DAAAAAAAAAAAA! done. o) |
 Ananova Crowe 7/24/01 . chapter 10 Oooo, dat's creepy...all this back-stabbing and mutant-eating-nanos is makin' me itch...uh oh... |
 Kit Thespian 7/24/01 . chapter 9aw man... keep going! Write more FAST! |
 WolvieRogue to lazy to sign in 7/24/01 . chapter 9 AAAARRRGGGGHHH! NO! It can't be! Please continue! PLEASE! |
 Kalgoorlie 7/24/01 . chapter 9I feel this requires another you-know-what. ::draws breath:: DUN DUN DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA! |