This is a great story! I loved it! But maybe a little more description when reid gets taken. But otherwise perfection.

ok in short words if was great I LOVE IT

OMG I friggen love this!! It's so amazing! U ROCK!!

I'm new to this whole fanfiction thing but from what I read and u wrote
I want to say that this story fix the movie sum changes here n there
But besides that it was awsome I loved it

I just finally discovered the amazingness that is The Covenant last week (and have watched it about three times in the past five days lol). So being a diehard fanfic addict I immediately started searching for fanfics from the movie. But I tend to be a bit of a snob in what I consider to be good fanfiction, stemming from being a grammar/spelling nazi, an avid fanfic writer myself, and largely from just the sheer number of good fanfics I've read in the other fandoms I frequent. I was pretty disappointed in what I found in most of the Covenant fanfics. I was shocked that the majority of the fics I found were slash stories between the four guys. Now I have nothing against slash fics, and have several that are favorites of mine from other fandoms, but for some reason it just bothered me with this movie fandom. So finding your story was like a breath of fresh air. First off, you're one of the few authors that stuck with the canon of the movie, choosing to continue your own sequel to the movie, which is exactly what I was looking for. You created a very compelling plot that kept in context with the movie, but was entirely entertaining in its own right. Plus, you're just an overall great author. :) So now I can't wait to read your other stories!

I like the intro , it makes me feel like I'm reading an actual bound book.

I Just finished reading ur story (took me 3 hours) just wanted to say "I LOVED IT!!" It was truly a great story (that's what i think) The plot of the story was very climatic and good. It was in order and the story was very thrilling. I was abit dissapointed tho that u never focused on Caleb's and Sarah's Relationship...(it was a small letdown but i ignored it coz the story was FANTASTIC) besides that i wished too that u would write something like we be Caleb, (listen in his head and all) But that's just my view but besides all this. It Truly was a great story to read and it was worth the time to read. I hope u further prosper with ur gift of writing and produce more fantastic stories like this. WIshing u all the Luck. Cherrio and thank you so much for writing this wonderful story. I hope when Covenant II comes out it will be similar to your story or much better. (hope it's not a letdown)

I don't know where to begin. :) I enjoyed very much reading this story. I liked the twists and I didn't expect Evelyn to have such a secret. Perhaps, she was at her moment of weakness or longing etc that lead her to that choice or has the fella Pope cast a spell on Evelyn back in those days because he saw it as a means of finally break the Covenant from within (not only to perpetuate his bloodline).

The pacing was just right and I was apprehensive adding the FBI into the mix but it turned out well. As Evelyn Danvers said, it was just only a matter of time.

Robbie helping the boys was nice little scene. He saw them as F4 huh. Cute. I see a different side of Tyler here that he rarely shows to his close friends. I hope we'll be seeing more of Robbie. He has grown attached to Caleb, huh. :)

One thing I don't understand, Chase was struck by the tsunami energy force from the three guys so it left him quite senseless when Caleb handed him to the police, won't Chase recover and disappear from his holding cell? And start making trouble again?

So! Reid was practically incapacitated after his Ascension ordeal that it looked like he died.I think it was probably due the fact that his Power hasn't been willed back. Am I right? That was sort of a side effect? I wonder how he'll come back. His mother will never be the same again.

It was so sad to see Evelyn Danvers go. I was expecting we would be seeing her again because she had straightened herself out away from alcohol and cigarettes.

I visited your Covenant album and I liked your choices. :) The fan vids were kewl too. I'm looking forward to reading Descension and Covenant 3.

Thanks for sharing.

HELL NO!!YOU ARE ** KIDDING ME

i like it

Ilove it!!
Please don't hesitate to continue with it!

I would just like to congratulate you on a truly amazing story. The entire time I was reading it I could just see the story unfolding in my mind like a movie. I have never experienced a feeling like it before. I can imagine if it truly was the next chapter for the Four Sons. I loved it and I thought you really brought the characters to life. Although I have to admit I didn't like how you killed of Reid. But the bonus scene leaves room for the possibility that Reid will return.

Once again Congratulations

Nice Bro ! i myself love the Covenant it's my top 5 movies!

wow to this one...

nicely done ^_^

well I think its cool...
good job for you doing this...