I greatly enjoy this story. =] You made the couple undeniably adorable. =D

Keep up the good work! =]

Any idea on when this will be back up and running? It's an amazing story and I believe it should be continued

Of course, I read the uncensored version on your website, and I have to say *fans self* that was extremely hot. Only you two could so successfully paint Zell in a believable and oh-so-sexy light. I'm more in love with his character than ever. You two have definately set the bar for hot and believable sex for me, as well as spot-on characterization of Quistis who in my opinion is the hardest character in the final fantasy universe to write. Can't wait to read future chapters! I love you guys!

Sweetness.

NO! Not in front of BOBO!
But Damn you're right that chapter is alot longer in LJ.
So I had to read that one instead of this one but I'm still commenting here.
LOL I know why do guys think I can just rub on it like
a Genie is just going to pop out!
OH MY GOD that scene brings back memories.. HEHE
Oh my god that was such a long CHAPTER keep up the good work. Though I have a feeling
it's going to be a long wait.

I would just like to point out that this is an absolutely fantastic story. Such writing! You two go above and beyond the average writing skill on this site. I don't believe I've found a flaw in how you two portray the characters, although I'm sure you two found many. I don't know about anyone else (although I do have a good hint from the rest of your reviews), but I'm loving every bit of this story.

Keep up the amazing work =]

Have I told you two how much I love this story? Well, I love this story. You've got me laughing, 'awwing', and of course, gotta love the porn! (especially well-written porn!) I must say, you two write some great smut- I'm jealous. Usually I'm at my keyboard, blushing or giggling because I just typed 'penis'. Your scenes have just the right blend of tension and realism, something that, in my opinion, is really hard to do!

You two have such a spot-on Quistis, it's amazing! It's exactly how I see her, as someone who wants to screw up, be irritating, (be a HUMAN BEING) but is too afraid of the rejection that often goes hand in hand with that. In that sense, Zell is definately perfect for her- (walking id, anyone?) I loved this chapter and can't WAIT for the next! Thanks for making my day with the update!

right, a few things to say here. first is that i just adore this fic. i read through it so many times, perfect couple, the whole fic is genious! this is my top fave fic and wish you guys the best.

second is slightly less enthusiastic. I want to read the full smutty version, but i dont use live journal! and visitors can't unlock smutty content! do you guys have anywhere else at all i can read the full version of this fic?

fathfully following ya till its compleated.

Yeah, the livejournal version is a lot better. It put a lot more responsibility for the last line on Quisty :-) Loved the line about his ass being hers!

It is nice to see Zell moving out of his 'impetuous boy' persona--just as it is to see Quisty thawing. The scene in Squall's office where she nearly said something she'd later forget was just priceless. They really are good for one another.

I am looking forward to seeing them practice with the status magics and take on Siefer. Keep writing! :-)

I've been lapping up the dynamic since I came here from Growth, but do we need the 'gory' details. (I'm not even looking at the livejournal version) Heck, even the last line is too much detail for my tastes. Couldn't before and after scenes work just as well?

Aw, I've missed you two! You were gone for quite a bit, but such is life and we can't hold it against you. I hope we get Chapter 18 soon though, because I'm impatient and greedy. Awesome chapter, as usual. You two really deliver.

Oh god i love this fic... Zell is so dammed sweet and clumsy and eager and it just makes it so HOT! >:D I cnt wait for the next update!

Aww I'm glad everything is peach keen... LOL! 0_0 oMG though Quistis is totally trying
to get some, with hot bod Zell... LOL that was a clean hot passionate writing. Hehe Zell
was going to take all of Quistis in... hehe. WTF! ZELL NO YOU DAMN MINUTE MAN

Anywayx coolness, I'll probably check out the porn when I need a fix when you guys
take another long time between chapters. >_>.

at last you update!

I absolutely loved your fic until this chapter, it was is so well-written, I think I've never had so many laughs over a fic in my life;D It was amazing till chapter 13, one of the best fics I've ever read! I loved Zell all the way, you've built up their relationship so nicely. Personally I'd have preferred a nice happy ending instead of this drama with that James guy, but apparently that's just me.