i loved it..
:)

You know, I was going to write a fic that spanned the books that the Pevensies were in... Including things that bring or brought Lucy and Peter together. Having read this, I fear mine would be complete shite. I loved this and it said everything I wanted to say in mine. If I was still going to write that story, someone would say that I just copied your perfection, and not very well either.

i almost cried reading this one. the only thing preventing that was my dazedness after completing a literature assignment:)

I'm Not mach of a Peter/Lucy fun, But I like this, it a Good job. Thank You.

Ohh, do, do, DO write more! I read this yesterday and then kept thinking so much about it that I just had to come and read it again. And it's the most awesome L/P ever!!

Don't leave us hopers in the lurch! Do continue writing on Peter/Lu, since nobody else seems to do it the way you do!

:)

yeah, i totally hated that in the movie Caspian is so old, which meant that he fell in love with Susan :P

Awesome! ^-^

I loved this story. It was great! It's so hard to find something so well written for Peter/Lucy.

When I was just a little girl I read the Lion, the Witch, and the Wardrobe. I identified with Lucy, the sweet, loving, valient dreamer. I had a crush on Peter, the strong, protective, high king.
When I saw the movie I saw chemistry. The way Peter holds Lucy's hand and gives her a piggy back ride and is always on her side. The way Lucy smiles up at him, eyes glowing, always knowing that her big brother loves and cares for her.
This fan fiction is wonderful, beautiful! It makes me happy and sad. I love it! I really enjoyed this realistic portrayl of Lucy and Peter. Perfect
Good luck on writing Paladin

On a more immature note Lucy and Peter are so much better than Peter and Susan.

Well done. Nice use of imagery.

Marry me. Please. This was...gorgeous, beautiful, delicious. I need more. :] -scurries off to profile-

this is actually very good written piece of fic, regardless the topic. and yes, i think people do think what it's like to go from 23 to 9 and carry around all those experience. i love every sentences seems flowing and mature, touching the subject very delicately. very nice.

I JUST Got finished reading all the Chronicles and I LUVED the movie AND as much as Incest is ugghh to me I LUV this fic. Its wonderful, well-written, beautifully plotted and everything. Where did u find your dates? I've been tryin to figure out the dates and such since I read the book! This was truly wonderful!

Great story. I love Peter/Lucy, but it's hard to find this ship. I loved the fact that Lucy is more mature, because lots of people think of her as a little girl.

Besides, I think in the books and the movie the relationship between them is really strong. Great job!

So sad! Honestly, that's the most passionate fanfic ive ever read! It was pure poetry.