UPDATE ! PLEASE

Four words: Death by Snu Snu.

The question is, though, will it go in true Love Hina fashion with the seducers constantly getting interrupted (and Keitaro getting a Naru Punch and being called a pervert despite evidence of the others being even worse perverts)?

Desperate Housewives can be scary... can't they?

Great prologes. I would like to read more of this story. I hope you will continue this story. Please.

god help poor Keitaro...two sexually frustated females are after him...and they're more of a threat than any of the girls at the INN!

Who gets there first? Who goes first? or will Amalla suggest a three way? Tsuruko may just be kinky enough to go along with it.

What? You don't think she;s kinky? Who joins her sister and her supposed 'fiance' in the bath? Not to mention the suggestive comments and demands to see some sign of public affection.

Keitaro should have developed some pretty impressive escape skills to advance the plot, like dissapearing without a trace or being able to substitute with plushys, furniture or Naru to avoiud being glombed, shot at or hit.

(In case you couldn;t tell, I despise Naru, but don't let that affect your advancement of this sure-fire win of a fanfic.)

Please hurry up and update this fic. It sounds like it's gonna be one hell of an experience for Keitaro.

Now this is chock full of potential. There will be a major upset in the house and between these two amorous yet powerful females. Fireworks will fly and I can't wait for the show.

Excellent start,


brindani

Now that the backstory's done, we can get on to the actual story. These situations are very throughly thought out and well planned. I can only hope that the rest of the story is similarly plotted out. And the only way to prove that is to update as soon as possible. Please do. This is a good concept that I would hate to see go to waste.

Please update this one soon as well as Coming Home to Roost.

I like the prologues, looks like Keitaro's in deep $hit again. I'm looking forward to see how you get Keitaro's tenants, especially shinobu, to, umm... give him up.

Cool. This should make things interesting.

Good thing he's immortal.

I'm really looking foward for the next chapter!

cool

great chapter, you know I hope both get him cause it will be funny
beyond belif, update soon

I'm glad that you've resumed writing/posting. I've enjoyed your stories and this one is no exception.

I hope that you can continue to update this and "Coming Home to Roost" more frequently. They both look to be excellent stories with new or seldom seen ideas.