 The 17th Immortal 2009-10-27 . chapter 10…
…the scary thing is, I think I actually preferred the omake by Iddy over the real thing… |
 cabrera1234 2009-10-19 . chapter 2awesome story |
 tycel 2009-10-18 . chapter 10Great chapter! I don't think I could really stop laughing all the way through it yeah pure win on the last omake was great:) |
 Innortal 2009-10-17 . chapter 10Enjoyed the humor as always. |
 dogbertcarroll 2009-10-17 . chapter 10"You! Serve your mistress properly and go find your long lost bisexual twin! Now, damn it!"
Mana only looked on, smirking at Yoruichi smugly. 'Good luck, girl. This one is my win!
LOL!
Great chapter, loved the omakes, loved what happened to the Tendo morons more! |
 James Axelrad 2009-10-17 . chapter 10hey, this is a really great chapter.
one thing that might be fun to consider, that last omake. some variation on that with the twins getting roped into things?
hope there is more soon! |
 OBSERVER01 2009-10-17 . chapter 10great chapter man.keep it up! |
 Wrin 2009-10-16 . chapter 10Amazing, though I can't figure out if it's really a story or just something to make me crack up every few minutes. |
 Jeffrey Vasquez 2009-10-16 . chapter 10BWAHAHAHAHA! Only Ranma!
Well written as always, Shade. It seemed to be one of those, "How-many-shocking-things-can-you-fit-into-one-chapter?" episodes. The tidbit about Genma being Urahara's creations...and then you have the assassination...well, shocking doesn't even cover it. I just wasn't expecting either of them at all. Blindsided doesn't even begin to cover it. Still, Mana, Sosuke, and Ranma all in the same room, could there be any doubt concerning the outcome? No. Not one bit. The question now is, what happens to Nabiki and Akane the assassins? Poor Soun. Poor Kasumi. The shame and sudden scrutiny of the Japanese government is going to destroy them.
Loved the Omakes too, especially the last one. I can totally see Ranma reacting that way. Fan and Lan would be in so much trouble. They not only interrupted family time, but Mana has to sleep on the couch!
I did see one sentence where you'd doubled up some words, but heck if I can find it now that I've gone through everything a second time. If I find it, I'll let you know.
Can't wait for more. |
 Sorakage Sama 2009-10-16 . chapter 10Ok, fisr off, that last omake was pure win. I hven't laughed thhat hard in a while.
Same for the rest of the chapter. That was pure LOL funny. My favorite part was the sheer irony of Nabiki plotting the ultimate downfall of Ranma and his wives, only to get nailed by the secret (yet not comptent) service. I wonder how long it'll be until we see Nabiki and Akane again.
Ja ne
Sorakage Sama |
 ecchansama 2009-10-16 . chapter 10Well, they got their foreplay at least...
I would've wanted to see Mousse as well tbh.
But anyway, I laughed. There's something special about taking Ranma, crossing it with a few others, and then making it absurdly insane that appeals to me. Here's to more chapters!
/ecchansama |
 lord Martiya 2009-10-16 . chapter 10Nice job! Only a little thing: the United States Secret Service switched to FNP90 submachine guns into late 1990s. |
 Dumbledork 2009-10-16 . chapter 10What do you want to hear? This story rocks. |
 aznblackhowling 2009-10-15 . chapter 10Another great update. I look forward to seeing what will happen to Akane.
I hope you will update again soon. Along with update to your other story No Turning Back. |
 Cat on a Shtick 2009-10-15 . chapter 10Sending Akane to guantanamo bay? Your nuttier than a fruitcake, but that's usually a good thing in my opinion, always leads to better reading. |