How is pale 'Germanic' skin any different from pale Irish, English, or Dutch skin? Or any other average caucasian skin tone? Is there a reason for her DNA's country of origin to be mentioned? Or perhaps she can be deported there so she doesn't interfere with the Harry Potter characters too much?

`There was a lot in that song. I admired it, loved it. I also knew what it meant. I bobbed my head to the music and sang along with the lyrics.`

If you can't even spell a band's name right, I doubt you know enough lyrics (besides the few you just copied and pasted from some lyrics website) to sing along to it. Spelling a band's name wrong also gives me the impression that you have no idea what that song means -- you can't even begin to understand such a great song as that. Sorry2say.

You're story was GREAT!

Nice start! I'm a bit unsure as to where she was bfore she blacked out, but I'm sure you'll explain that later on. This is very well written and intriguing.

Sending mischief your way!

Snowfire the Kitsune