i liked it a lot it showed how much the fantastic twins cared for each otha :) i luved it so much

Great twin angst fic! I love the descriptions of battle damage you come up with for these two. You had me wondering while if they would make it, even though I knew they would in the end.

cool story. read it all in one go

i like it. don't know much about the twins. or bluestreak for that matter. mainly a bumblebee and jazz fan. keep up the good work.

wah, am crying threw the whole story i thought sunny wouldnt live seroisly i have tissues near me, thank the lord there both okay! (tears run down) great i just riuned my friday!
commander hawk= okay(handing starscream girl a tissue) please make more, if you can have a bit of romance, i mean really sunny needs a femme, a real nice one that suites him.
starscream girl= wah,(tears) wah

Heh, gotta love ol' Hatchet and his temper. Deep down they know he cares, and he knows that they know that he cares ;) Great stuff Jo!

Finally you relieve us of the poor twins' misery. LOL. Well done, Pura! It's no grandiose plot, but the drama in it makes it for a great story, all the way to the end.

-MZ

Aw. Nice side/sun story.

YAY..!! they made it.. WOOHOO..!! ^^

I knew Ratchet was gonna have a fit. At least the two of them are back safe. If a bit worse for wear.

Good job - I look forward to more!

Gah!! Pleasepleaseplease let them find the boys! D=

I hope they're found soon. Ratchet's gonna have a fit. Please update again soon.

Really loving that banter between the twins. Looks like the cavalry is on it's way

Wow, I am actually quite liking this story. It seems runs along quickly but without being really choppy (My favorite type of story)

Your stories have got me hooked on the Twins, and I'm wondering how they're going to pull out in this one!