That was good. Poor Wash.

This is an excellent fic. So sad :_(

Oh...please tell me you got a sequel in store for after the movie, when Zoe remembers River's cryptic warning! Cuz that would be some mighty interesting times to be scribing about;)

This was totally amazing, freakochicko! Especially River's episode, as some people would go overboard and make her completely unstable while spouting gibberish (which this wasn't). Definitely gotta wonder how this moment's gonna affect the crew:(

BEB

Oh, no. Why?! Why?! Why didn't they realize the warning? It was here...it was on time. *sniff* Why did Wash have to DIE?!

I think it is great, espacially for a first try at the Firefly series! I think you wrote River very well. Kudos to you!

I like the idea of River being able to see Wash's death but not being able to do anything about it or not knowing exactly that its his death she's seeing. The only thing I didn't really see as well was the pain part and it belonging to Wash. I thought his death seemed pretty painless; it looked as though he died instantly. When I first started reading this, I thought the pain in the chest and the screaming was a forshadowing of how Zoe was going to be feeling as a result of Wash's death. But I liked this fic the way it is. I haven't seen many scenarios showing River knowing Wash is going to die, and you'd think she'd see that.