Wow, really nice! I love good Malek-storys. There are just too few of them. Thanks for this one!

Great work!! Feel so sorry for Jared! To loose his wife and child like that and then go through torture and blending. Loved it!

That was soo sad but really well written. I am really glad that you did this back story.

beautifully written, no-one seems to write about previous hosts, this story was very enjoyable. it would be nice to read some more of your work.

Great backstory and well written!