I guess I should just get used to non-endings. Either that or start reading only "Complete" stories from now on... but that's probably not going to happen. Anyway, this was interesting stuff, got a little confused towards the end with the fire demon and whatnot but always intrigued by the plotline. I really like that Darkwing is in the story, I wasn't sure he would be at first. As for Eva, I didn't trust that bird from the moment she showed up.

I have to say, this has been one of the most interesting, storys I have read, in a long time. Action, intrege, mystery and even a little comidy relief, thrown in for good mesure. WoW! I hope it is not long, before the next chapter comes in. I'm always chopin at the bit, to see how things develope. It's great so far, plese don't leave me hangin too long.

I... ah... ack... YOU TOTALLY USED BETH IN THIS CHAPTER AND I MISSED IT UNTIL NOW? What is WRONG with me?! Jeez. O_o (Okay, "referenced" I guess. Not directly used. STILL, there she was! XD) Yeah, so. This is called "read more quickly, Rebecca." Thank you! And meanwhile I like the plot twist and the confusion, because it still COULD be Taurus Bulba... or possibly not... But they said Honker was "the wrong one" so how could they be going after him? Anyway. I won't make it to chapter nine today but at least there is a chapter nine for me to read. :)

Well, I'm still only up to chapter seven, but i'm getting there. Might manage to finish today, but I thought in case I don't I'd just say... SLICK? BWAHAHAHA! XD

Hey there. Thanks greatly for getting this next chapter up. Indeed, it took a while, but it was most definitely WELL worth the wait. Excellent job, as usual, on all of the action, drama and exchanges. I'm definitely going to be looking forward to more of this.

This was wonderful. Good job with Darkwing and Eva; now Honker must choose between his father-in-law, someone he shares a huge mutual love for Gosalyn, and his co-worker, who might be the best option for him getting some respect at his work and advance through this investigation.

And excellent fight scene with Malicia.


Keep the good writing.

This was the story that got me into reading your other works. it nice to see an update.





P.S. I bet Eva just planted that bug to keep Honker safe. but that's just my guess.

OMG, I've been reading this story for quite some time now and it was kicked **! Keep it up! *faving this*

Durn it, I was supposed to finish reading this story MONTHS ago. Oh well. Two more chapters down and now I only have two to go... sigh. More's the pity since I love Milly; that scene with her and Honker is adorable! The Eva/Honker/Gosalyn love triangle is interesting, but I don't trust Eva. Something's a little too perfect there. ;D Then again that's the spy life... never know who you can trust... mwahahaha. Well, you have enough on your plate so I won't beg you to finish this fic, but if you ever have more to post, I for one will be thrilled... ;)

I like where this story is going. And giving Gosalyn a little sister? Nice touch!

Ahh! I thought I added this to my story alert awhile ago... I was surprised to see two new chapters added awhile ago. Durr, I suck XD

Possibly not Bulba? The plot thickens :o And I can't get enough of Milly, she's so dang adorable XD Her crush on Honker is so cute!

So yeah, here I said I'd be reading this more regularly and it took me what, two weeks to get through more of it? Well, not from lack of interest, I swear. I liked these two chapters, particularly Eva's introduction in chapter three. Mwahahaha. Poor Honker, he's not the kind to know how to deal with an agressive woman! ^_^ I like the method of poisoning; very intriguing. So, I have four more chapters before I catch up with you and then I have to just sit on my hands and wait for one of your fics to be updated. Poor, poor me. ;)

Wow, this is a pretty good fic. Though it seems you're leaning more towards a HonkerxEva pairing than a HonkerxGosalyn. If Gosalyn wants her relationship with Honker to work out, she should probably try being a bit more uh... gentle & less forceful in how she treats him. Perhaps they could even make out once in a while. Also, I wonder who wants to hurt Honker. Question is, who WOULDN'T want to hurt Honker, given his history with Darkwing Duck. Say, perhaps Splatter Phoenix is back & wants revenge for her botched theft attempt of the Mona Lisa's smile. She could be spinning her own web of conspiracy with her sentient paint to keep people too baffled to notice her until it's too late & Honker is dead. Also, I wonder when Honker will tell Gosalyn about her new inheritence from her grandfather. Perhaps once this whole "Taurus Bulba or Splatter Phoenix" thing's been worked out. Well, anyway, update soon.

Okay, I am FINALLY going to catch up on this story. Why I haven't so far, I can't explain, because I love Honker like whoa. Anyway though - I'll try and get through a chapter a day if I'm lucky! ^_^ Loving it so far (which is not a surprise) - there's a tone to this story and this version of the future that I haven't seen in many other "ten years later" type fics. I don't know what it is, maybe just your writing style, but I like it. Oh, and Gos inheriting a vast fortune? That's a new one. :D

great chapter