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dinopoodle
2009-11-02 . chapter 1
That is the perfect funeral for jacob, and selmac. Well done nice job!
Kamikashi
2009-04-09 . chapter 1
Beautiful. And a good choice for the poem.
Katd
2006-12-28 . chapter 1
omg uv got me crying, ty for such a gd fic
SG-Fan
2006-09-27 . chapter 1
Good job.
syzygy13
2006-09-26 . chapter 1
How absolutely beautiful. Thank you.

"We toast our faithful comrades,
now fallen from the sky,
And gently caught by God's own hand
To be with Him on high.

To dwell among the soaring clouds
they knew so well before;
From dawn patrol and victory roll
at heaven's very door.

And as we fly among them there
We're sure to hear their plea-
'Take care my friend- watch your six;
And do one more roll- just for me.'"

"One More Roll"- Commander Gerald Coffee, Hanoi, 1968
SeaChanter
2006-09-26 . chapter 1
This still has to be one of my most favorite. It makes me cry if I just read the title. So glad to see it up here.
Sara Loui
2006-09-26 . chapter 1
This is one of the first fics in a long time that have brought a tear to my eye. Partly down to the poingniant send off and partly because I still can't believe they killed Jacob off. I still haven't forgiven TPTB for it.
Thanks for the read

Sara Lou xx
elitenova
2006-09-26 . chapter 1
I dont know what to say but, update soon.
Ilovesg1
2006-09-26 . chapter 1
Thank you. That was absolutely beautiful; I am crying into my keyboard.
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